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for Hogwarts Guards

by erisaken

person KuroiHato
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually into crossover stories but you just changed my mind! Hook, line, and sinker. Oh and, Yeah for smart!powerful!Naruto and SasuNaru! Uh-huh, oh-yeah. You rule, you rule. It's your birthday, it's you birthday. *clears thorat* Anyway, good job!
person teion
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I THINK THAT YOU SHOULD HAVE GAARA AND NEJI GO AND INO IF THAT MEANS MORE SAKUR BADHING.
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww i wanna read more!!! it was just getting good!! Update again soon!!!
person oohshiny
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first, i vote for;

Gaara

Neji

Hinata

Temari

& Shino

2nd, UPDATE NOW AND EMAIL ME IF YOU ACTULLY DO!!
deannathx@comcast.net
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
grait shap. now about thous karekters. Gaara, Neji, Hinata, Kiba, Kankuro, Shikamaru and Shino. Thank you.
person ReDFaNG89
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think you should use gaara, Neji, Kiba and Shino. That's just an opinion but i really wouldn't mind who it is. as long as there's some great yaoi involved. :-D. Great so far though.
person Lihrah
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bring over Gaara, Neji, Kiba, and Lee! PWEASE?!?!?! I'm imagining Gaara in a Gryfindor school uniform...-drools over the keyboard-

And you know, Itachi reminds me so much of Ayame from Fruits Basket the way he acts towards Sasuke...

And, Itachi means "weasel" in Japanese, so maybe change his ANBU mask into a weasel? You don't have to but I thought it might be cool.

Awsome chapter. Are you going to make Ron fall for Naruto and Hermoine torn between getting jealous and having a nosebleed?

I never would have expected Hermione to be a fellow fangirl! Ginny, yeah, but Hermy? I love it!

Oh and maybe bring Remus into the scene and make him have a threesome with Itachi and Kyuubi!

LOL that part where Ron mistakes Naruto for a girl and the Uchihas laugh was HILARIOUS!

I love you and keep updating! I like your smart Narutos but the way he became ANBU at such a young age is kinda too much. Try to keep it more plausable and maybe have him become ANBU when everyone was doing Chuunin exams or something? It would make much more sense if it was during his 2.5 year training period with Jiraiya.

That reminds me...YOU HAVE TO MAKE JIRAIYA VISIT HOGWARTS! I can't wait to see what kind of reaction the teachers (Macgonnagal and Snape primarily) and students will have to the mega pervert Sannin!

BOO SAKURA YOU SUCK! I adore you're Sakura bashing ^^

I LOVE YOU!!!!!
~Lihrah

P.S. Wow that was one long review...
person Lihrah
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, and I wanted to add, I have a sudden urge to do fanart of Naruto...If I ever do, I'll tell you and give you the link^^ But it will probably take forever...I hate homework...

Jatamashite!

~Lihrah
person Crimson-Tenshi
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great second chapter. And Kyuubi's in it, which is cool. And I like Itachi, with how he's all touchy feely with Sasuke, it just very cute.

Oh and my fav line was “I thought she was just a tag along.” That was priceless and made me laugh.

As to the voting, I would love to see Neji, Gaara, Shikamaru, Ino - As you said if we pick her, there would be more Sakura bashing, which I'm a big fan of, as I hate mega-forehead.

Anyway, great update, hope to read more soon.

Ja and take care.
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this! Please update again soon!

Ok, my votes are Gaara, Hinata, Neji, and Shino. And for the sake of fun and bashing the ditz, let's throw in a vote for Ino as well. Really looking forward to more of your story. ^^