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for A Stray Child

by Mikeal

person emp78
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Waking up in stage 2 has got to be the worst!
Sasuke's reaction to thoughts of having sex again was perfect!
Great story! Keep up the good work!!
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooowww.. :( why are you in pain??
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope you feel better soon!

And of course we care!!!! In fact I can't wait.
person Eternel
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not that it's any of my buisness to ask but why are you in pain? are you bored with writing this story? I really like it and think it's not doing that bad, but it is your decision as far as how much you wanna write and if you want to continue with a sequel or not, thx for at least finishing up this story, as you said you will, it's better than not finishing it at all like some people do.

- Snow
person Dragon7
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! Pregnant Sasuke ROCKS!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to see what happens next so UPDATE SOON.
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh Orochimaru is funny!
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such fun now!!!!
person Dragon7
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was funny as hell Sasuke mood lol!!!!!!!! I can't wait for next chapter Orochimaru is invited to Konoha it all too much I think I'm going to bust a gut. update update SOoooooooooNnnnnnn.
person Dragon7
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so FUCKING FUNNY!!!!!!!! With the way Sasuke moods are right now Naruto may not make it though the pregnancy. UPDATE SOON I can't wait to see Orochimaru reaction to the news.
person Dragon7
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so happy that the preg is coming up; I just can;t wait so UPDATE SOON.