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I love the whole Orochimaru father thing, It way to Funny. lol!!! I mean he’s so out of character that he actually creeper then he usually is. (SO KEEP IT UP) I can't wait to see how Orochimaru acts when Sasuke gets pregnant man is that going to be GOOD.


P.S. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!

*shivers* Orochimaru still gives me the creeps.....I like this story keep it up. Je Ne!

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and see what happens when Sasuke and Naruto go to visit Orochimaru. That going to be so great. Anyway UPDATE with a longer chapter SOON.

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Not to worry, your life in the real world comes before what goes on here at aff.net, anyone who bitches at you about not updating or anything like that has no right to do so. You have been writing an amazing story and put so much work into it so far there should be no reason to abandon you as an author simply because you will not be able to update as often any more or will need some down time to yourself. I hope everything turns out better for you where you're at right now, good luck, and when it comes down to it just try to remember who your friends are, even if they are only yourself and the voice inside your head, not saying that you have one, but anyway...good luck to you in the future and I hope everything turns out okay, I'll be waiting patiently to see how you are doing, so until next time.

- Snow

Take your time and work at your own pase. No one can give you shit if you having trubles at home. I do like the story line thou and I hope you contune it soon. Just have fun and every thing will work out soon. Good luck to you.

YOU’RE SO GOOD TO US!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean four chapters but I'll take it and more if you have it. I hope you but Neiji together with someone. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON


All four chapters were FUCKING fantastic!!!!!!!

Hey keep going is getting really interesting and I want to read a very gruesome death to the bastard of Itachi, oh oh and I want to see how Sasuke and Naruto fall more in love with each other! well
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Romance between who Itachi and Sasuke or Naruto and Sasuke. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.


P.S. Great chapter!!!!

Ewww! Corpse sex! Are Kakashi and Orochimaru going to team up to save Sasuke from the deranged Itachi? Keep going. Loving this fic!