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for A Stray Child

by Mikeal

person emp78
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh!! Is Orochimaru really going to rip his balls off, or just plain kill him? BTW, if Itachi is in a cell where chakra can't work, how is Orochimaru going to be able to hurt him? Update soon, ne?
person Dragon7
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Dragon7
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter when Orochimaru arrives in Konoha. SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON
person Dragon7
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I love that Orochimaru wants to protect Sasuke. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.


P.S. This story is getting so GOOD!!!!!!!!!!

P.S.S. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
person emp78
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.O They've got Itachi, but now Daddy Orochimaru is coming to town? What the hell did Sasuke do to deserve all this?! Poor Sasuke.
person Dragon7
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How could you stop their just when it was getting good.I have to find out who Sasuke real father is so please update soon.
person Anon
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As it was getting better and better. Hope this updates soon because this really became suspenseful!
person Dragon7
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oo my GOD!!!!!! Orochimaru is that was the last person I suspected to be Sasuke father. Is Orochimaru going to show up? if he is will he be good or evil? It's very very rear that you see Orochimaru character playing any other role that not the bad guy in these Fic's. It would be fantastic to see Orochimaru character playing the good guy. But not complete good because that would be just too plan WEIRD but a positive person in Sasuke's life. PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING and UPDATE SOON.
person Anon
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*laughs*

Hahaha... that was a new one, and a good angle. Dear, oh dear... poor Sasuke...

*evilly continues laughing*
person Dragon7
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better I can't get enough of it PLEASE UPDATE SOON.