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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters of absolutely fabulous smut, I love how fast you update! Part of me still thinks that Iruka let Kakashi get off easy but I'm glad that Iruka at least said something to him and I'm glad that Kakashi finally had the guts to actually stay the night, morning sex was almost like the bonus for staying. :)
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmm I'm happy now, *very* happy. That was super hot, you rock at this! Ha, I laughed at the mental image I had of obito lying under a big rock...ha Cant wait 4 more!
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...that....was.....so.....hott......*face still red*
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, the parting shot made me laugh. I loved it how you showed us Kakashi's mind working around the problem whilst iruka was stroking him through it (I wouldn't be able to think through that but then Kakashi is a shinobi loool, he can deal with distractions ^_^) anyway - L-O-V-E-D the smut, it was f****** sexy as you probably know already. It was great anyway.
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the chapter, Kakashi was surprised the decent teacher asked him to you know... heh.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow - my mouth is all dry now. That was one of the hottest most romantic sex scenes I've ever read! It was truly well done. I could easliy visualise every single movement, every touch, everything! WELL DONE!!
But I could smack you for that last line ;-)
But I could smack you for that last line ;-)
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this story but, I would like more Kakasji and Iruka verbal interactions. Nice job.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally speechless, that was great. The scene with Iruka controlling how Kakashi was giving him head was...well...hot, no it was F**KING HOT! The whole chapter was one of the best lemons I've read for this pairing. Please,please tell me you have another story lined up in the near future. There are not enough words to express how much I liked the whole story. Great Job!!!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Iruka really has moved past it of if he's just pretending, there's also the idea that he's started dating someone else that's why he's being nicer to Kakashi. Whatever it is I'm glad Iruka is going to make Kakashi come to him and this time if Iruka's smart he'll make Kakashi work for it a little no need to make it easy, especially after he left him in the middle of the night. ;)
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. Have to say, it's very good... and yummy. Heh.