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O_O can we say hot? definitely good smut *nods to self* but I'm already wondering how both will react to this after the haze of sex has passed. Will Kakashi do another runner? I mean because if he does - hell, Iruka is definitely not going to like that and maybe won't even take it lying down lolol (wow that could have so many connotations 'take it lying down' *giggles) anyway - yeah. So yeah, good chp ^_^

Hina xXxx

Very hot. The bar scene was funny. I'm glad Iruka told him off. I swear, if Kakashi leaves Iruka alone again, I'm gonna give him a spankin'! Mmm... Kakashi... spankin'. I can't wait to see what happens on this morning after.

Wow, I have to admit I'm rather intrigued by this fic. The only thing that could make it better was if you made sure to check your work over for spelling and grammatical errors. It gets tiring after a while having to go back and re-read sentences due to various mistakes. Regardless though, I do genuinely like this fic and look forward to your next update. My best wishes for you and your writing.

Another really good chapter. I'm glad Iruka said something, he just needed a little "liquid courage". I think it'd be great if Iruka left him there this time. I could just see Kakashi waking up and finding a note saying, "Thanks, you can show your way out.", and him being totally pissed. Of course while it would be funny, I'd much rather see them together than not. The lemon was really hot, I seem to say that a lot about your stories, you write them very well. ;)

I just want to give Kakashi a good shake, if he's not there in the morning Iruka's going to think he doesn't want anything more and might just ignore him or pretend it didn't happen. But aside from the frustration that is Kakashi I thought the smut was rather yummy (if a little short) and I can't wait for more! :)

lol - how could he have to ask why Iruka was avoiding him? He left in the middle of the night (not even a note) after mind blowing sex, heh I'd be avoiding him too (then again maybe not). Sorry I didn't review 1st chapter - I was too lazy to sign in lol but I thought both first and second chapters are really good (first one was especially hot) and I loved how you made Kakashi stay outside all night contemplating things lol, it was funny when Iruka walked past him in the morning and spoke to im adn then walked off again. :D made me smile lool.

Okay I'll shut up now ^_^
Update soon, ne?

Hina xXxx

Poor Kakashi, can't realize his feeling :( But another grrrreat chapter!

P.s.- I LOVE the way you write (that may not mean much coming from me cuz i cant write for shit lol)

That was a great chapter. I really like where this story is going. Nicely done!

Honestly, Kakashi is so dense. I'm a little worried about Iruka, though. It's funny how Kakashi tried to convince himself that he knew what he was doing when he didn't have a clue. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Another good chapter. I can't believe that Kakashi thought Iruka would just come lusting after him. If I had been in Iruka's position, and really like the guy, and this happened I'd avoid him too. So maybe that's why Iruka's acting that way, he really liked the guy and is now trying to convince himself it didn't happen. Or maybe Iruka's a playa too and has the same views on sex as Kakashi. That's be kinda hard for Kakashi to overcome. Okay, enough rambling. I liked it and can't wait for the next chapter.