rate_review Reviews

Please writh more.

awwwwww! I am a big fan of the fluff, so thank you for writing me some. It was a really cute fic and I liked how you wrote Chouji a lot. The one bit of criticism I have is that it felt rushed in the end, like you were really wanting to get it finished. There weren't many errors in the beginning, but the last few paragraphs had them popping up here at there. Also "bigger man" and "smaller man" got a little redundant after awhile. That's just me being totally nitpicky though, because I really did love the story. AFF needs more fluff in my opinion. Please write more of it ^___^