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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good second chapter. I can't wait for the third.
Best of luck and good wishes to you.
Butterfly Beauty
Best of luck and good wishes to you.
Butterfly Beauty
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is just too juicy, please update soon!!
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is truly fascinating. I really want to know what is different in this alternat world. I am also very curious about that seal on Naruto. I hope you continue this story.
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this. Love it, love it, love it. Can't wait for more, either, if you would be so kind. *grins* Definitely one of the most interesting spins I've ever seen taken for a Naruto fic, and you definitely seem to know your stuff, which is always nice. Attention to detail and all that. I'm particularly appreciative of your writing style, which is not only beautifully rendered, from a grammatical and syntax-based point of view, but also deals well with the perspectives you've taken, and the narrative you seem to be building, which thus far I've found to be deep and well thought out. SO yeah. All praise from me. Keep it up!
Kamikumai.
Kamikumai.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, I love this fiction! Please, please continue.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story. This is just so amazing. I want to read more.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sugoi.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... I'm really surprised out oh many people /haven’t/ commented. I mean, seriously, this fic is amazing! At first I was like, 'Pfft... another alternative universe thingy. What uke-poop.' But then I was like, 'Whoa! Naruto's totally beating those sound-noobs!' Then I read the second chapter, and I was all like, 'WDF!? I didn't know this fic was /good/! Why don't people tell me these things!?' And eventually after many, 'God, Naruto... Your so awesome, you dobe you.' and 'L-O-L, (Yes, I say that out loud a lot) I hope Naruto realizes where he is soon… and where’s Sasu-teme to make more drama!? Drama I say! DRAMA!' But after all that,I realized...
That there was no more chapters! I think I cried a little... Update soon! D;
That there was no more chapters! I think I cried a little... Update soon! D;
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's COOL! I DO like this fic and i hope you write next chapter soon =)
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh now this is good i cant wait for an update. ^_^