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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok gotta say nice first chapter would have been better with a little more detail but it was your first lemon
i would say if you want either hinata or sakura go for hinata. i personally have always thought she'd be great in bed (i think she likes the thought of being submissive to her naruto sama. that and she has a nice ass that's just begging to be slapped a few times)
i would say if you want either hinata or sakura go for hinata. i personally have always thought she'd be great in bed (i think she likes the thought of being submissive to her naruto sama. that and she has a nice ass that's just begging to be slapped a few times)
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That was pretty hot!
Good length, nice style, descriptive enough, overall pretty good. Doesnthave really naything specifically to do with Kyuubi as the title suggest's, but overall pretty nice.
And If you do decide to continue, which you should, Hinata please!!!
Good length, nice style, descriptive enough, overall pretty good. Doesnthave really naything specifically to do with Kyuubi as the title suggest's, but overall pretty nice.
And If you do decide to continue, which you should, Hinata please!!!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun short story.
I'm a Naruto + Hinata fan and I got a good setup for this one to lead into.
Simple... Hinata went to spy on Naruto training for the millionth time and saw the WHOLE thing and makes damn sure he knows she's crazy about him ;).
I'm a Naruto + Hinata fan and I got a good setup for this one to lead into.
Simple... Hinata went to spy on Naruto training for the millionth time and saw the WHOLE thing and makes damn sure he knows she's crazy about him ;).
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievable. A absolutely amazing story.
I find it hard to believe that this was your first lemon.
Would love to see more chapters soon.
I find it hard to believe that this was your first lemon.
Would love to see more chapters soon.
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Job.....
I myself would like to see another chapter.
I myself would like to see another chapter.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If that was your first lemon you are one blessed person. That was incredible. You put in tons of detail, had an amazing premise that I've sadly NEVER seen done before, and you worked it perfectly. Please add more to this.
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go right ahead and do a chapter with Hinata or Sakura (or even a chapter with both Hinata and Sakura)
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Don't stop with just Sakura and Hinata though. Give Ayame and Temari a go as well. Update soon!