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for A sad life deserves more

by Zendura

person tim nelson
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It has grat plots and grate sex seans. I houp you will continue the story I looke forwed to reading it. how do you come up with the names of the jusus?
person Mr.X
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I totaly,totaly,totaly to infinity LOVE
this fic...It's been a long time since i
read a good fic like this,grate plot by the
way...TOTALY LOVE THE INO/GARRA ACTION GOING ON...
Though i think yer totaly EVIL for cutting the last
chappy short where that paring is consered...I WANTED
TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED NEXT WITH THOSE 2 DAME IT...XD...
SO yea,hop to it...XD...MORE CHAPPYIES PLEASE.XD.
person bloodfang
schedule July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just recently found the site, love the stories you wrote, hope you finish them sometime
person ryuus2
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you dead or something? I've just checked your FF, DV, and AFF accounts and there's been no action from you in 20 months! Please, if your still alive, appease the masses. Give us, your loyal readers, more chapters and stories to read.
person Conroy
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When I was reading this story I couldn't help but think of Gui and Lee somehow becoming like the Beasts of the Krosan and Nayan forests in the card game Magi:The Gathering. It came from them calling themselves beasts. That's just my mind doing weird stuff. Nice story though, wish to read more.
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soooooooooo good.
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story, hope you update it soon
person marc7028
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.......sooooooooooo when your u going 2 update it o0 its good
person Garbolo
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story.please keep up the great work.
p.s. I really like how Ino and Garaa are together
person Sleekwulf
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found this Fanfic awhile ago and from the beginning to so far, I have been absolutely blown away. Every pairing is absolutely perfect, nothing need be changed in the slightest. I was 'attracted' to this fic as soon as I saw that Haku played an important part, And Didn't DIE! (I hated that they killed her, I agree with your version of her gender too) I would have commented reviewed earlier but didn't think it would be read that far back.

Now, onto the questions:
1. Probably not important, but is Konohamaru going to be involved at all, or is he just being scratched off. NOt a suggestion, merely curious. =^_^=

2. The pairings for Lee are running low as they are becoming attached to other great characters, but is it possible for a Lee/Sakura if a Sakura/Sasuke isn't planned. I remember he had a major crush on her and he did (in the series anyway) impress Sakura once she saw passed his interesting facial features (GO Bushy Brows!! Rock Lee rules.) Or even a Lee/Tenten. An OOC would work too, I press on this because Lee is a favorite of mine and he should get at least A girl.

3. And lastly, on a more perverted note, I read you planned a Temari/Kiba pairing and I wondered...(looks down with a blush)...would Akamaru be part of the pairing too...they are partners after all. Just a Thought.

...Bonus! I know I'm not a well known person around here, but I am an avid reader of all the fanfics both here on AFF and the previous FF.net, and I wanted to offer a plotpoint, it's more a Shinobi mission then anything but it involves a unique Ninja character and bloodline similar to the Orochi clan. I am not an especially talented writer but I know my plots, you're the only author I've seen that I think could get it off the shelf on paper(so to speak) If interested, you can send me an answer and I would be happy to send an email of it's details. I don't care who owns it, I just like reading stories and good authors are hard to find. Whatever you choose: Thank you for writing This story, I thought Haku would never be 'resurrected' truly.
Thank you for listening.