rate_review Reviews

I love your story... I've been an avid reader for quite a while. As for what to do with Sasuke, *points to his own story* I sorted him out at the end of my chapter 14. Granted, I hate Sasuke. Lol. Keep up the good work! Hopefully Tayuya will follow Kin's path.

-Casa

I love the new chapters!

So Ino and Gaara are going to be Tanuki demons now? THats freaking awesome. I love this story and am so glad you finally updated. ^^ Keep up the great work.

Holy Mother of Squishy Frogs!!! That was incredible! So much was excellent that I can't single out just one moment to praise. I am now going bonkers trying to figure out if Neji is gonna slip the main branch's leash, what type of demon Gaara and Ino are if they turned into demons, and how you're going to deal with the whole fetch Tsunade dealy as well as other thoughts this chapter provoked.I can wait for those answers, however, I do have one big question that can't wait and that is, are you going to have Itachi show up in this fic?
And as for the fight scenes? I could see them in my mind's eye so you did really well with them. An amazing chapter that leaves me drooling for more. Can't wait for your update.

So we have two winkles, and four ginies; oh the possibilities (and that's not including what tricks they can do with their tails). This story is boss.

I love the story and I cann`t wait till you update so PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE

yo Zendura! great to be reading this again. hope everything went well for you, anyway. haha, i loved reading the 'race' scene at the beginning (lol who wouldn't love to wake up in a similar situation?). i was really starting to wonder what you were planning for hinata, but recent events have given me a good idea what. nice dune reference, and...YAY FOR SHIKA LOVE! very nice touch, the whole shinigami thing with him.

Finally I swear i was going stir crazy waiting for this story to be updated. It is after all my favorite story and every update makes my day. I am not a very good writer myself, good concepts bad plot lines, however I am a fairly good critic and I have to say this is by far my favorite story. I eagerly await updates, and thank you for being such a terrific author.

Good story, I expect to see more or else *does the evil eye (yes, I actually get a pair of those when I'm angry)* Yeah, needless to say I like this story- very good job at manipulating the plot to work without utterly destroying the original setup! (Honestly, I don't think I could have done that myself, I've never even really thought about it) Very effective way of killing off Akai without having to make up another OC or something that might have gotten Haku and Naruto disqualified, damn, I won't get any sleep at all I keep listing every thing I like about the story and I'd ruin the plot for anyone who hasn't read it but is already reading the review (shame on you people, you know who you are- not really, I read the reviews first sometimes too). Alright, I'm gonna have to scold you a little bit on grammar- one of the most frequent mistakes I noticed was the mis-usage of the word 'your' instead of 'you're'- 'your' being a possessive pronoun (for those reading this that don't understand, that 'your' is used in reference to an object belonging to another person) where you are generally are intending to use the contraction 'you're' (for those reading this and have English as a first language that don't understand that 'you're' is a contraction for 'you are' there's a nice scratch and sniff sticker at the bottom of the pool, you should go check it out [or wait until your balls drop before you continue reading this, I'm talking third grade material here people. it's not that hard])

Anyway, continue with the story (it's really difficult to find a story with a good plot, and plenty of good lemons) Later. WS.

Your BACK!(mega-glomps you) Oh you have noooooo idea how much I've missed you. I checked AFF everytime I went online to see if this fic was updated. I'm not griping I just wanted you to know how much I missed you.
Dude, talk about Hiashi making a mistake alienating Hinata, I see major ass-kickage in the future. Are you going to have Neji smacked out of his doomed fate mentality by Naruto or will he still believe in inescapable destiny?
I find the mission that Kin is on veeery intriguing. Perhaps she'll be Shika's mate and the punishment seal will be eradicated via demon ritual?
This chapter was excellent and I can't wait for the next. Take care and have cookies(sends you a plate of a dozen homemade chocolate chunk cookies)

Glad to see your back, this was another excelent chapter and i still hope to see much more from you