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i very much enjoy this story and it has been quite some time since you last updated. I realize that you said you were moving and losing the internet for a while but it just seems to have been so long, i hope you get back soon to continue this story.

HOLY SNATCH MATCHERS and no i dont know what that means. (lol) Thats one of the best storys i've ever read! i rarely determine a good story because. well. good stories are rare! but this sure as hell is a good one! you are a great and understanding person about all that love stuff and the bisexual thingies and you deserve a sack of gold coins and 4 medals! but this is real life. and such things never happen. but atleast you have the adoration of tons of fans like me! plus all those flames flamers throw you can cook hotdogs over! yummie! well. i gotta go now. i do so hope youll be back soon.

Best Wishes.

TheDunceKap

This is a good story. As for your peev about Naruto's age, he could have started the acadamy at a younger age than the others. Since he is clanless since birth, everything he did had to be self-taught and that includes displaying the ability to manipulate chakra in the slightest bit. Everyone else has a family that would teach them so they could get through the Graduation Exam on the first try and thus a possible later enty into the academy. With the exception of the very studious Sakura, everyone(that eventually became a ninja that year) would just ignore Iruka for the most part or fall asleep.

Please I hope you will update soon I am getting bored it seem all the other soties I read the authors just stoped updating and there isn`t ay good stories to read so please update soon PLEASE

Very, very interesting.

Not the first story where I've seen Haku as a herm, but certainly the best...

Spelling-wise, there's a difference between "thru", "through", and "threw".

"Thru" is the modern shorthanded writing for "through", which would be better if you wrote it that way. It is used this way most of the time.

"Threw", is the past tense of "throw". Use that when someone throws something in the past.

i would've review sooner... well not really i just got the sudden urge to review nevertheless.

i really like the way you've done this story. its by far the most original erotic-naruto fanfic i've read and its well written to boot; so kudos for both of those. i keep wanting naruto to... well to put it bluntly i want him to bone miko and anko (loved the alt-ritual scene btw. bible black is a good hentai). anko is one of my favorite females in naruto and i have a huge grey area of morals so incest (haku and naruto few miko as a sister) doesn't really bother me that much. so i would like to read something along those lines and perhaps a few "friends with benefits" for haku and naruto too.

anyway i love the story and if you need a beta or anything pm me.

peace,
Shrap.

my vote: keep the japanese names. they just sound better. about the hinata thing, i dont really want to know, i just think that after everything 'you' put her through in this story, she deserves a little eternal happiness with them. and i cant wait to see how shikamaru reacts to all this!

Yesssssss! Akai's butt got squashed(giggles maniacally) I find myself very curious as to how you're going to handle Naruto's fights with Neji and then Gaara. I love the way you're handling the relationships. I can't wait to see what you'll have happen next. BTW what taboos were you speaking of breaking in chapter 9's author note?

wow, Zendura. great fic! i was looking through some here on AFF and found yours, i read the description (liked it) and started to read. well...i ended up reading the WHOLE thing on saturday! i cant get enough of this story. anyways, now i know why you didn't put too much effort into Akai. i had thought you didn't give enough detail into his character, but i guess it doesn't really matter now. way to use him as a plot advancer! just wondering: are you planning any great plot twist which involves hinata actually being inducted into the kitsune clan (considering her bloodline)?

I guess this new chapter was ok I am sorry to say it but iI was kinda bored at the last part with it just Miko and Anko oh and I also like Anko hell it is very rare to find a Anko and Naruto pairring I love your story and I don`t mind seeing women on women action what guy wouldn`t but for me I would rather see guy on girl action and HELL NO on seeing male on male now that is sick sorry but thats just me oooops sorry I love your story and I cann`t wait till you update again oh yeah I was wondering why would Miko want lazy guy in the clan sorry not sure how to spell his name and your making the fox clan to be sex crazy wouldn`t he think it be to troublesome and when will Naruto get some of Miko that is what I am waitting for