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NO WAY! You deserve more than a hundred reviews for this kind of a fic! Trust me this is just not like any fics here in adultfanfiction.net that the story is all about sex! This fic has actually a story that's interesting!

I'm not saying that the sex part is not good actaully its really good but I'm more of a story type reader I care about the story than just the sex...

If you haven't yet try posting this story in fanfiction.net but less graphic or you may get kicked out! But it is where you'll get a lot of reviews! And I think with this fic you'll get a lot there! and for the recored I'm actually a Yaoi fan that almost only read Yaoi fic except for a few like this one and to get me to read a het fic in Naruto is amazing since I almost Hate no not hate I just don't like tham thats all I mean the female characters there!

Good chapter. I liked your take on the Saku/Ino fight.

By the way, you had Hinata calling Neji her sister. Nee-san generally means older sister, Nii-san for older brother.

This is a very good story. I will say i'm not usually one for lemon, mostly because i can't write it very well...hence it doesn't exist to me. However, you mesh the story and the reasons behind it very well. Instead of just some random sex feast it is honestly explained and can be understood through most any perspective and I appreciate that. Your writing style is easily comprehended and fun to read in general, though to forward some advice i have recieved and not taken you, you might want to think of a beta reader. However, most intelligent people just correct mistakes in their minds so whatever you choose is fine. In either case, I shall remain your avid reader and fan.

~Gavin Mcbaine aka. Stillnotwalking

I like the update it was a good one.Neverthought that shy Hinata would be reading Icha Icha.. That last seen was great but what is going to happen now between Hinata,Haku and Naruto

GOD BLESS YOU!!!I LOVE YOU!! Thank you so much for bringing Hinata into the group. Will you be making her a demon like Naruto and Haku as well? I hope so, she deserves it. And Naruto deserves to have both of them too!!

Great, FABULOUS chapter!! Keep up the excellent work!!

This is NOT YAOI people! Haku is a futanari, or a hermaphrodite, if you will. A 100% girls body, but a fuctional dick too. Yaoi is strictly boy-boy - as in NO GIRLS! Is Hinata a boy now? NO! So think first, people before you assume.

All due respect, I do not believe this story is in the right section. It is yaoi, given Haku is a man regardless. If the individual has the male equipment, the person is a 'he' not a 'she'. Naruto is a 'he' too, thus this story is yaoi regardless.

Hooray for almost-yuri!

Anyways, interesting update. Hope to see more soon.

meow.......love u!!!!

Well never thought that Miko and Anko would be lovers the first night. But what would change if Miko took Haku's taunt/payback. If Miko went in the bedroom with those two what would of happened.