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for A sad life deserves more

by Zendura

person Kori
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I want to see an Anko-Miko sex scene now!
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so much, i can't wait for the next one to come out.
person LadyKind
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brilliant really I love it now give me some more of that wonderful story
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this stor but I was wondering when will it be updated sorry to rush you but I love this stor and I cann`t wait to read more of it
person wildkit
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Aidis
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please! ^.^
-Aidis
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was very good accept for that jutsus where Nruto if he stays in it to long he cold get pregnant now that I don`t like because if he gets pregnant
then I would this story is stupid sorry thats just my opinion so if you have it that he would never get pregnant then I would love the story even more and for Miko I really like her and I cann`t wait to read the next chapter so please update soon
person nimistar
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if you feel the need to write yaoi please put it in the right section.
person wildkit
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! *glomp* You are awesome!!!!
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a really really good chapter but the thing I am wondering about is are you going to make them into missing nin or something like that heck why cann`t you make it that can still live in Konoda and another thing who will be the 2 genins the 1 who is going to be with Kakashi and the other 1 on Naruto`s team oh well keep up the great work and update soon