rate_review Reviews

Cool fic. More please.
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Aidis

Please update as fast as you can. You are an amazing writer with a lot of talent. I will really enjoy the coming chapters. *bows*

You're a complete dumb ass. No really you are!

I like the story it has a few twists and turns. But the thing I like to see is that everyone didn't really change but the series you could of left the same. I wonder what if Haku was a female and she did live after the battle between Kakashi and Zabuza.

I really like this story the thing I would like to see is it updated alot often but it doesn`t have to be very long as long as it isn`t a very very short chapter and for Naruto`s power level I would say way above average bt not to power where he is unstoppable and the bloodline why cann`t he have both speed and whatever the fox demon gives him and with Haku`s gender wat you did was cool I like that and alsoI don`t drink coffee I don`t know I don`t think dark fic are really good oh well its your story its up to you other than that I hope that you update soon and keep up the good work because I really like your story

This story is amazing. You really should write more of it.

Ok well I just read chapter 3 and wow I thought it was very very good I Like the idea of making both of them demons the only thing that sucks was you let Sasuke live oh well so will Naruto tell Kakashi and the old man what really happened that he and Haku are both demons now and also what about the Chuunin Exam and will Haku be in it as well lol oh yeah what will Sakura do after seeing her Sasuke get thrown though the window by Naruto lol oh well I just hope that you will UPDATE SOON because I really really like this story and I cann`t wat to read more of it

The story is pretty good.

First this story shouldn't be listed under the het catagory, it's yaoi.

Second, Naruto is extremely OC in this. He would never cut himself and he would never cry like a baby to a stranger. Is this story set before Zabuza and Haku are killed? Or is this an AU story where Haku lives, but Zabuza is dead? I was a little confused about that.

I hope you continue writing. Like I said, the story was pretty good.

Does this really belong in the het section? It looks a lot like yaoi to me.