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for Don't You Feel It Too?

by Yanksbabe51

schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally understand writers block... I swear my muse takes vacations! All of a sudden I know what I want to write but just can't find the words! Good story, hang in there... I was told be a very good writer to try working on something else, it often works for me.
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*prepares noseplugs for impending smutty doom* Got a little angsty in some spots for my taste, but appealing enough to keep my attention. Hope you update soon, great job.
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Clinical depression is a seriously scary thing... Shino has serious problems... it's good that you stated it was "normal" for their clan and that it usually passed... but in reality, it doesn't. If you're lucky it can be controlled with meds for the rest of your life but often the meds only work for several years, then comes the scary part as they scramble to find another drug that will work before you completely break apart. Very scary.
person hatorissexbitch
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the whole threesome bit. that is HOT!! stories good to so update soon!!!
person cynaga
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kankuro/Kiba/Shino vibe - I'm feeling it and can't wait to read it. Nice story. I like the relationship and psychological aspects!
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE the long chapters! Keep it up this is great.
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay, everythings getting better!! cant wait for the next chapter ^_^
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like a triad is definitely brewing. Kiba and Kankuro can be strong for Shino...protecting him from those who don't understand. That's why I've always rooted for strong partners for Naruto and Shino. Those two are a lot alike in many ways.
person llyoung
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for all three of the boys. Thanks for a new chapter.
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update update!!! i need to know what happens next. ^_^