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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you made Sasuke cum, so hot. Please update soon!
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey your stories are awsome. I especially liked this last chap of Housemates but just remember to keep up the good work and success; we need strong people in this world
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy, it’s been a while. I’ll have to skim back through some of the earlier chapters so I’ll remember what’s happening in this story. o_o;
Chapter 9: Man, Sasuke’s selfish. He’s getting more possessive by the day, I swear. . . . Heh—distract him with sex. (And if that doesn’t work, try food. Or vice-versa.) ^_^ . . . . This is very hotly written. I hope they each get turns to top in the future. . . . I really like this part: “they just stayed as they were: [. . .] because he couldn’t stand to part with Sasuke.” Very pretty. ♥ . . . . I hope Sasuke’s feelings become more genuine in the future.
Uh-oh, company. . . . Bigger uh-oh, Sakura’s crying. Yeah, I think of worst case scenarios when this sort of thing happens, too. õ_õ . . . . Well. Lee came to mind, but I hadn’t expected that. ô_o . . . . This puts a new twist on Sasuke really being alive; if he comes out into the open, what will the effects be? . . . . I like that bit about how Sasuke’s “death” was “affecting” Naruto. Or the way it looks anyway. . . . Oh boy, that’s always thrilling when Sakura gets pissed at Sasuke. =D . . . . Err, you forgot the end-quotes at the line, “I won’t let him ruin your life anymore than he already has.” . . . . Crap. Fine date. Naruto, Sasuke comes first. And if Sakura and Lee come before Sasuke on that date, then it better be worth it later. . . . Sasuke’ll definitely be pissed. But the “concessions” . . . Sasuke could turn those around to his advantage big time. On the other hand, if Naruto’s that determined to go to the party, he’ll wonder how much he’s got Naruto under his thumb. But on the other hand, if he develops more genuine feelings for Naruto by then . . . This is so much fun to think about! Cool twist! =D And I absolutely love this line: “Bound by a promise to keep promises: his nindo.” ♥ . . . . Wow, check this out: Not only did Naruto promise and is now bound by that, but also a) his invitation was unique, and b) other people might not come. If he had doubts about going even after promising, he’ll be even more pressured now. Nice bit about Gai, by the way. X3
(*shiver*) Sasuke’s just got this aura that’s so masterful. Just his initial actions in this scene are . . . (*sighs dreamily*) ♥ . . . . Boy, wouldn’t it suck if they were interrupted again? ^^;;; . . . . Hang on a second. This line is sexy and all, but it’s a little contradictory: “He grabbed Naruto’s hair in a gentle grip and spoke against his lips; holding Naruto back from kissing him.” How can Naruto not kiss Sasuke if Sasuke’s got their lips together?? õ.ô . . . . Love Naruto’s determination. . . . Man. What a seducer. ♥ . . . . As steamy as this is, I can’t help but imagine how furious and possibly betrayed Sasuke will feel once he learns of the date of the party. . . . Wow. o.o And . . . that was . . . sudden. The way it ended so quickly.
Congrats on getting on the Dean’s List.
I liked this chapter. I’m not sure how I felt about the abrupt ending. I liked it, but it was also . . . I dunno, disappointing? Hard to say. Either way, I enjoyed reading this chapter, and hope to see some more updates on this story soon. ^_^
Chapter 9: Man, Sasuke’s selfish. He’s getting more possessive by the day, I swear. . . . Heh—distract him with sex. (And if that doesn’t work, try food. Or vice-versa.) ^_^ . . . . This is very hotly written. I hope they each get turns to top in the future. . . . I really like this part: “they just stayed as they were: [. . .] because he couldn’t stand to part with Sasuke.” Very pretty. ♥ . . . . I hope Sasuke’s feelings become more genuine in the future.
Uh-oh, company. . . . Bigger uh-oh, Sakura’s crying. Yeah, I think of worst case scenarios when this sort of thing happens, too. õ_õ . . . . Well. Lee came to mind, but I hadn’t expected that. ô_o . . . . This puts a new twist on Sasuke really being alive; if he comes out into the open, what will the effects be? . . . . I like that bit about how Sasuke’s “death” was “affecting” Naruto. Or the way it looks anyway. . . . Oh boy, that’s always thrilling when Sakura gets pissed at Sasuke. =D . . . . Err, you forgot the end-quotes at the line, “I won’t let him ruin your life anymore than he already has.” . . . . Crap. Fine date. Naruto, Sasuke comes first. And if Sakura and Lee come before Sasuke on that date, then it better be worth it later. . . . Sasuke’ll definitely be pissed. But the “concessions” . . . Sasuke could turn those around to his advantage big time. On the other hand, if Naruto’s that determined to go to the party, he’ll wonder how much he’s got Naruto under his thumb. But on the other hand, if he develops more genuine feelings for Naruto by then . . . This is so much fun to think about! Cool twist! =D And I absolutely love this line: “Bound by a promise to keep promises: his nindo.” ♥ . . . . Wow, check this out: Not only did Naruto promise and is now bound by that, but also a) his invitation was unique, and b) other people might not come. If he had doubts about going even after promising, he’ll be even more pressured now. Nice bit about Gai, by the way. X3
(*shiver*) Sasuke’s just got this aura that’s so masterful. Just his initial actions in this scene are . . . (*sighs dreamily*) ♥ . . . . Boy, wouldn’t it suck if they were interrupted again? ^^;;; . . . . Hang on a second. This line is sexy and all, but it’s a little contradictory: “He grabbed Naruto’s hair in a gentle grip and spoke against his lips; holding Naruto back from kissing him.” How can Naruto not kiss Sasuke if Sasuke’s got their lips together?? õ.ô . . . . Love Naruto’s determination. . . . Man. What a seducer. ♥ . . . . As steamy as this is, I can’t help but imagine how furious and possibly betrayed Sasuke will feel once he learns of the date of the party. . . . Wow. o.o And . . . that was . . . sudden. The way it ended so quickly.
Congrats on getting on the Dean’s List.
I liked this chapter. I’m not sure how I felt about the abrupt ending. I liked it, but it was also . . . I dunno, disappointing? Hard to say. Either way, I enjoyed reading this chapter, and hope to see some more updates on this story soon. ^_^
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i couldnt remember the details of this story at all :S but i recognised the summary and knew i liked it alot sooo i just re read the entire thing. it was good :D seems i had missed chapter 8 so i got to read 2 'new' chapters yay!! I love how horny they are LOL and how much naruto enjoys his perineum play. I havent seen that mentioned in many fics, twas intersting *grins*
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fantastic story! love it to pieces! :D look forward to future chapters. :D
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's excellent!! Well done on making the Dean's list!! I loved the chapter, kinda wanna kick Sakura, but yeah I get it she's concerned, LOL. She doesn't know she's cock-blocking, but damn Sasuke's gonna have a fit. Speaking of Sasuke!! He was soo Cute in this chapter!!! So happy to see he's not so firmly entrenched in denial as I thought. *Hugs him* And *hugs u* Thank you so much for the update and the awesome smut XD. It's nice to know you're still thinking of us over here.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.... Sasuke's really really really not going to take it well when he discovers Naruto now has something else to do on his birthday. Not well at all.
(Excellent blowjob, btw.) ^^ I love this story. I'm happy to see it updating again. Keep up the great work!
(Excellent blowjob, btw.) ^^ I love this story. I'm happy to see it updating again. Keep up the great work!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sasukes sorta like a house wife, not wanting her husband to go to the bar.poor naruto not knowing hes being used in one of the worst ways possible.hope you can update soon
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
waaaaah! omg! great fic! i love how you did/are doing sasuke! i love it when he's a possessive bastard! lol oh and congrats on getting dean's list! hope to read more from you soon! ^_^
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: Two in the morning?? What’s the occasion? . . . Oh, this is going to be fun, “hot’n’horny in the middle of training.” 6_6 . . . Oh boy, this is great! :D . . . Hey, since when can Naruto use chakra-strings? ô_o . . . XD This is so deliberate! . . . I don’t know how long they’ve been out there, but do you know there’s a medical problem if a guy has an erection that lasts for more than 4 hours? So this has got to be sometime before 6 am. Otherwise, Sasuke needs a nurse. (. . . no pun intended. *sweat*) . . . Oh boy, “two can play at that game.” That’s always good news, heh heh heh. . . . Hey, isn’t the water cold? . . . Cool idea, “Does he have me under some kind of jutsu?” That WOULD be entertaining if he did! XD . . . Huh? Sasuke’s not going to finish? õ_õ
Uh-oh, here comes the bad mood. . . . Great dialogue. And I love the repeated question: “What are you thinking?” That’s great. . . . That is so Sasuke: short and to the point, leaving out unnecessary details. . . . Oh, that was clever. “Why would one person kiss another person?” “Well, you kiss a person because you . . . (O_O)” “. . .” That was great; it totally came out slightly wrong, and yet made perfect sense! XD . . . Nice ending. :)
To the A/N: No, I don’t think Naruto was too uke. At least he’s not this mewling, whining little shrimp I get in some stories. I think he could be a little more . . . aggressive, I guess I’d say. 9_9
Uh-oh, here comes the bad mood. . . . Great dialogue. And I love the repeated question: “What are you thinking?” That’s great. . . . That is so Sasuke: short and to the point, leaving out unnecessary details. . . . Oh, that was clever. “Why would one person kiss another person?” “Well, you kiss a person because you . . . (O_O)” “. . .” That was great; it totally came out slightly wrong, and yet made perfect sense! XD . . . Nice ending. :)
To the A/N: No, I don’t think Naruto was too uke. At least he’s not this mewling, whining little shrimp I get in some stories. I think he could be a little more . . . aggressive, I guess I’d say. 9_9