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I'm really enjoying your writing. Hope the next chapter comes out soon.

GLAD YOU UPDATED,SHORT CHAPTER BE DAMNED I LIKED IT.DOES SASUKE HAVE NO FEELINGS FOR NARUTO WHAT SO EVER BUT LUST?HE COMES OFF THAT WAY,HOPE YOU HAVE TIME TO UPDATE AGAIN SOON

LOL, well I liked it enough for the both of us XD. Even the a/n at the beginning was fantastic, LOL, I can't remember ever having such a wonderful greeting XD. Lmao!! And the best thing is that even though it was everything you promised, it was ridiculously sweet at the same time!! Naruto is adorable in this fic. Innocent without being stupidly girly and wimpy, *Glomps u* for that alone you deserve a golden star. LOL, not to mention the fact that that was the best morning Ever, LOL, Sasuke in nothing but an apron cooking ramen, LOL, I'm surprised naruto didn't die of a massive brain hemorrhage through his nose!! LOL. And him passing out, cause he held his breath, *snicker* you're one of the first people to actually make the passing out seem plausible. That's such a beginner's mistake XD, LOL, but most people catch themselves and breathe before they pass out XD. And the perineum stimulation and Naruto being so fucking cute and wanting to experiment. it's like he's brand new XD. And I guess he is XD, is so fucking adorable. *Huggles him and you* And you got that without making him into a simpering Uke!! *Glomps u* you have no idea how impressed I am for that, LOL. You ROCK!! Thank you so much for the update sweetie, and LOL, for some reason with this story I don't mind the wait at all. Probably because it was that way from the beginning, I find that when authors start out updating often and then fall off, I tend to loose interest, but if the updates were sparse to begin with it's easier to deal, I don't know if that makes any sense at all, but meh, LOL XD.

An absolutely awsome story. The slow build up to actual sasu/naru bits was awsome and made the actual events more vivid. You write sasuke and naruto well. Plese continue with this great story. There will be pie if you do :D

Nice job! I like this and what you are doing with the chatacteres.

I really like this fic. I can't wait until Sasuke panics because he realizes just how much Naruto means to him... Cause damn that Uchiha needs to be taken down a peg or two.
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Where is the next chapter dude? Hello..?

I LIKE HOW NEEDY SASUKES BECOME FOR NARUTOS ATTENTION,AND WANTING HIM ALL TO HIMSELF.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON

meanie bug! wat kinda place is that to stop?! grrr, u better not take long with its follow up!

This story is adorable. I like your depiction of Sasuke. Please update soon.