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by oraday

person Word_Slave
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one, I just picked up on it. I do think though that Naruto was too uke on this and I'd love to have him SH0W Sauske how much Sauske needs him... By taking a long.. time. But not in writing it. okay?
Slave
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think he was too uke - it didn't actually occur to me until I read your author's note but then maybe that's just me, sasnarusasu is good too ^_^. heh, Naruto was mean though lol, waking Sasuke up just so he could get him all hot and bothered but loool boy did it backfire on him :D it's like nothing flusters Sasuke. Thanks for the update , I really like this fic and can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Hina xXxx
person Chria
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I laughed every couple of lines. Please make Sasuke suffer more. He so deserves it. After reading this line: "He arched a brow when he noticed that Naruto hadn't moved at all and that his blush had not receded in the least but instead seemed to be getting redder by the second." I was lauging so much thinking about all the perverted thoughts Naruto must be having.
You have very smooth writing and Housemates has an excellent pace. :)
person Allys
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, XD. WOW, XD That was great fun XD, LOL. What the hell was Naruto thinking?? "I don't have boobs but I have an ass" LMAO!!! The fact that Sasuke didn't much worse than he did still amazes me. The little tease XD. LOL, betcha he won't be trying that again soon XD. Or at least not with different intentions in mind XD. I love that Sasuke was all straight forward with it, LOL, it's about time. No Naruto didn't come over as too uke, just oblivious, as though he hadn't thought Sasuke was into boys at all, like I don't have the right stuff so slight won't help, I have to pull out all the stops, LOL, oh and how that plan backfired :sighs: :) that's still cracking me up XD. Thanks so much for the update. I have to find some time to go through Fraternity again before I can read the update, cause I don't remember what was going on. Oh well, an excuse to read it again XD. :GLOMPS: I so Agree the new ending ROCKS. Oh my god sooo gorgeous. I LOVE Naruto's outfit and everybody in school uniforms, and all the Sasuke and Naruto togetherness, gah!! :swoons:
person Rosebud
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Awesome chapter!
Please udate soon!^^
person lo
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! I like how you are pacing your story and this is just a lot of fun to read. Great work.
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nope nope, not too ukey, pleasantly ukey :D
person kioko
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, amazing, Sasuke is always looks for some kind of challenge doesn't he?
How to get Naruto in bead....I think that's a perfect challenge ^.~
person green embyr (fanfiction.net)
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is awesome and I can't wait for the next update, I've been waiting and waiting for this chapter!
person badluck
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAHH! thnx for the great update.
I hope Sasuke jumps Naruto xD
wonderful story. plz update as soon as u can ^_^