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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that...Naruto doesn't really pick up on thr signs and what not, so Sasuke's gonna have to step up his game! I'm looking forward to the updates by the way! Yeah...Sasuke is bossy too! Won't let Naruto take missions and what not..jealous fool!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has been fun to read!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter update soon ^^
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaawww, that was almost sweet. why HASN'T naruto jumped sasuke yet? mmm, if this continues on like this much longer sasuke is going to have to stop taking his matters into his own hands, and take someone else's instead. if only other people could know he was home, he could go hit on someone, but it looks like he might just have to hold naruto down and have his wicked way with him one of these days.
or maybe get him drunk? hmmmmm, i wonder...
good show, i look forwards to hearing more ^.^
or maybe get him drunk? hmmmmm, i wonder...
good show, i look forwards to hearing more ^.^
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, the chapter lengths are alright. LOL, I've seen way shorter. But they could be a little longer, if it wouldn't give too much away at a time. It really all depends on how long you plan on making the story...
Anywho, I like this story so far. It's interesting. Can't wait for more updates!
Anywho, I like this story so far. It's interesting. Can't wait for more updates!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute sasukes mind mixes what he thinks and hes sceming something else other than killing and a "partner" isnt he?
updates?
updates?
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehehe I LOVE this story!! ^^ hehehehehee
But yeah, Sasuke is such a bastard though. A manipulative little son of a bitch! (Though I can't wait until he gives up in frustration and jumps Naruto. hehehe)
Can't wait till chapter 6!
But yeah, Sasuke is such a bastard though. A manipulative little son of a bitch! (Though I can't wait until he gives up in frustration and jumps Naruto. hehehe)
Can't wait till chapter 6!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can't wait to read more, please update soon! ^^
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh this is such a cute story.. i lovethat there is no real OCCness.. keep them coming! i can't wait for the next chapter... and the chapter's aren't that short. i ususaly write until i have a mental block call it a chapter and post it until i can think of more for the story...
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking the direction this story is going in....