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by oraday

schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh hadn't noticed but I missed reading the previous chapter, it's okay just gave me more to read this time XD lool heh Sasuke's thoughts are a little on the devious side ne? But at least he was honest with himself and admitted why he really waned to get Naruto to fall for him. Lol, his logic was very Sasuske loool :D I don't think the chapters are too short eithr although id you decided to add more lol there'd be no complaints from my side heh so cool ^_^ hope to read more soon...?


Hina xXxx
person lo
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a fun story and I think you are writing wonderfully. Great work.
person twistedstorm
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nah, ur doing things good. the faster updates are a big plus! so, when IS Naru-chan going to follow Sasuke around like a lovesick puppy??
person Allys
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay that was Hott and Sweet XD. I really like how their relationship is sort of sneaking up on both of them. Silly Sasuke thinks he's got everything under control and Naruto is just Naruto and adorably clueless XD. Thank you so much for the update! And Hooray for Summer holidays XD. The chapters aren't too short XD, they're a good length, although I wouldn't be upset at all if they got longer XD. Have a nice Father's day!
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uchiha cooties. That's basically the best thing I've ever heard.
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yarrrrrrr! watta great story so far! please write more!
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, i can't wait for more!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAAAAHHHH It stops here?!? Noooo! I was getting so in to it T_T mooore please!
It's really good, I like their dialoges and Sasuke's teasing. I wonder how they wake up....hope somebody has morning wood, that'd be embarasing.
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww this chapter was sweet! Loved how they were at the end of it. Loved that vampire movie! I'd love to see a movie like that. :D
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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