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for The Risk

by JessicaM

person mukki
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...This story is going places. And I am strangely compelled to follow. Update soon please.
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very captivating. I have no idea where it's going, and I'm sad that there's a chasm between Sai and Naruto now, but I'm really enjoying it. I can't think of any other fic to compare this to, and I've read alot of fics.
The part where Naruto's reflection charged him disturbed me greatly. Nice going. Reflections creep me out.
Please keep writing!
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So if it isn't Kyuubi that had the red eyes and attacked Naruto, then who was it? It seemed like it was the fox since it was inside Naruto and had red eyes. This story is very interesting and I love the mystery! :)
person emp78
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please!!
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was good. I'm still on the edge of my seat! Now I wont be able to sleep til the next chapter!!! ;)
person dyessie
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good work..!! wee.. ^_^ luv it.. hey.. is it itachi?? please update soon..!!
person Astyra
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading it!
person Hen
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued by the plot so far. I just hope Naruto doesn't start murdering people while sleepwalking or something like that.
person cirquegirl999
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really do love where you're going with this. At first I thought it would be the, Naruto is fusing with Kyuubi, kind of thing but this seems to be a new take on it. You story has definitely caught my interest and I can't wait for the next update, I want to find out what happened to Naruto!lol
person kyandoru
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I think the story is great! It seems rather original, not like anything else I have read. And I like that as I read ALOT. Thanks for the update!
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