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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just found the story. It has a nice start so far, ch 2 had some interesting points that drew my interested even more. You ended ch 1 saying there was blood on Naruto's towel. . . just where did the blood come from I'm wondering? Sai is acting rather strange it makes me consider what he might be doing that has to do with the blood. Now Naruto is getting sick, and just who's eyes did he see? I hope to stick with the story, your doing great so far. Keep up the good work, I'll keep my eyes out for another chapter. Take care and have a good day.
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please!
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kool
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that the seconed chapter was more then a little interesting. Please keep going.
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freakin' awesome! Ne, how can a reflection attack you? Never mind; I've seen enough horror movies to know it can happen. Update soon!
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dammit! i hate cliffies! (but it is good....dammit!)
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good GOOD GOOOOD
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That last part in chappy 2 freaked me out dude!!! But i like it. I wanna know what part of naruto's subconscious is attacking him! Yikers!!
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this going to be Sai/Naru? Update soon!^^
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you've peeked my curiosity. Well, the summary got me interested and the set up of the first chapter got me hooked. I'll be keeping an eye out for the next installment.
Ja ne
Unerasable Sin
P.S. I hope the main pairing is NaruSai/SaiNaru. It definitely looks like you're setting it up for that. And, this is probably just wishful thinking, but could this eventually be an mpreg? I just got that vibe from the summary. I'm probably totally wrong though, which is fine too. ^_^'
Ja ne
Unerasable Sin
P.S. I hope the main pairing is NaruSai/SaiNaru. It definitely looks like you're setting it up for that. And, this is probably just wishful thinking, but could this eventually be an mpreg? I just got that vibe from the summary. I'm probably totally wrong though, which is fine too. ^_^'