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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That so like Sasuke. Look forward to reading your other one-shots. Until then, take care, and god bless.
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but I looked at this either way. This fic could either be a one-shot or it could be the starter of a huge fic, either way. I loved this very much...even thought I thought the sex could have been more descriptive _-_
*for you, no matter how descriptive the sex is ,it's never descriptive enough!*
(that's not true...okay maybe there's SOME truth to that...)
-Damp
*for you, no matter how descriptive the sex is ,it's never descriptive enough!*
(that's not true...okay maybe there's SOME truth to that...)
-Damp
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this a one-shot? *goes to check* Yup, it's a one-shot *goes to get a petition going* *and her gun*
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyaa! This has to be one of the most well-written Sasu/Naru fanfics I've ever read. Hands down. You managed to mix fluff and lust so perfectly, and without outright vulgarity.. It was absolutely perfect. Not only that, but you kept them both so well in-character; a good story is ruined if the characters are not IC.
Don't ever give up on writing. You've got pure talent!
Don't ever give up on writing. You've got pure talent!
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent lemon, one of the best I've had the pleasure of reading.
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Gods that was a great one-shot!! Please write another sometime soon!! Ttul!!
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was wonderful. I myself wouldn't really consider it dark, but it sure was great!
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh I love these types of stories. There isn't much of them. You know where the Seme is alot more in control and the uke really just follows them around. There isn't much of these out there.
Great job so far. You have a great start!!
Great job so far. You have a great start!!