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for When Flowers Wilt

by VantheKeyofLain

schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've only read the first chapter of this stroy, but I love it. And I would be happy if you would write a story under my challenge. And to answer your question the only person I would have a strong rejection to would be Jiraya, but only because he's so much older than her. Other than that I don't care who she's with, as long as I can really feel the connection. If you want to talk more e-mail me at inufangrl3004@yahoo.com

Thanks,

Neko
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story! Thanks for telling me about it. :3

And also, Thank you for trying out my challenge, People just don't write for my favorite characters enough.
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schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oi, it's me again! I'm at work still reading this story (please don't tell my boss).Ok moving on to chapter 7, let's see how far I get before I actually have to stop and do some actual work, lol. -animelover5107
schedule March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I've read all 10 chapters that you have posted and all I can say is... Please, please please please udate soon. I am so hooked it's not even funny. I felt so bad for Kakashi and I wanna know who would do such a thing! I mean ninja from his own village, I think I need to find a way to get in this story so I can find them and kick their butts!! LOL... Anyway like I've been saying and will continue to say, I love this fic, so please update as soon as you can. Ja!

P.S. I'm sorry for not reviewing for the other 3 chapters, but I was at work and wasn't suppossed to be on the net - shhhh, don't tell anyone :)
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good start, I really like it! I love any fic that has Sakura as one of the main characters. Well I'm off to read the other chapters now, Ja!
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok another chapter down, and definitely as good if not better than the first. I love how you made Lee grow up to look different from Gai. A lot of stories have him being his exact replica, and thats not really the case. Sure he looks like Gai but there are very obvious differences - oh well. Any who looking forward to reading thenext chapter, which I'm gonna do right now, Ja.
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still reading and loving it...
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I certainly wasn't expecting that!! I actually laughed, perhaps maybe it's too late and I should go to bed... Nah!! I think I'll read 1 more chapter and then I'll have to force myself to stop for the night, Ja.
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was kinda cute, I mean the end part. It does seem like they are in some kinda competition. Well it's late now so I off to bed. I'll read the rest tomorrow when I'm at work - just please don't tell my boss! G'night!