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by Inigeshi

schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the story overall but I felt that Hinata should have ruled them both.
person Cortman
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay, hotness is back. Oh how I've missed your fics. I thought about continuing your "Trainer" story but haven't gotten around to it. If I did, would I have your blessing?

(Not that it may ever happen. I've made a list of other 30 ideas for kink fics, and those are just the Naruto ones).


I found this chapter very hot, impressive considering I don't really find Gaara much of a turn on. You still have the great skill of portraying the Dom/Sub relationship in a manner that's vivid without being overly crude and elemental without being pretentious.

Big thumbs up
person winterkaguya
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow...i love neji's emotional intensity for hinata, i guess in this sense, he truly really did love her, huh?? i wonder how about gaara? how was hinata's response towards him?? and what is hinata's feelings for neji?? i like looking at the emotional aspect between nejihina, and so far we all know how committed neji is to her, but i ponder on hinata though....

i also like the gaahina in the story, short but the intensity is there and i'm curious as to how hinata deals with gaara and what is gaara doing as of now?? i'm not sure how much he loves her as neji did, but it would be nice to see how it will all end up.....

love your story....and update soon!!
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.So...Unique.I Could Never Have Imagine Neji And Hinata Like That.

It Was Well Written And, Even If I Skipped Out On The Yaoi Bits 'cuz 'm Not A Yaoi/Yuri Fan,Well-Researched.You Know Your S&M And Bondage.

I'm Waiting For More.And,This Time,I Hope To See More Neji Dominance And Gaara Sexiness. =D
person neko-sama
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS IS SOME GOOD DTUFF U R AMAZING PLEASE FINISH I LUV U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chuckles...neji was a very bad boy but he does play nice.
person theonlyone12
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I love this story. Please please try to update soon.
person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is there a reason you've spelled Gaara's name wrong? Honestly it's driving me nuts. lol.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whee! I just wanted to say that I like reading this story- Hinata wrapping Neji around her pretty little fingers... I like it, a lot.
>:3 And I'd love to see what she does to him before she forgives him. And how they work it out with Gaara.
person Cortman
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great fic but this chapter dissapointingly smutless ¬__¬

Check your yuri fic for my begging fo you to continue that D: