schedule
July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
X_X
Oh my well...I just read the first chapter and well, everyone just seems to OOc. While I was feeling it right until, I realized the kind of role Naruto played for them, I was a little stunned.
Because I honest to GOD can't see Naruto, who has loved Sakura forever, doing something like that with a Married Sasuke KNOWING he's married to Sakura. It's mind boggling. It's far fetched. It's difficult for me to swallow.
Naruto's personality...consenting to an affair? Mmm~ nah. I like that you tried to do something different tho. It is different I suppose.
Oh my well...I just read the first chapter and well, everyone just seems to OOc. While I was feeling it right until, I realized the kind of role Naruto played for them, I was a little stunned.
Because I honest to GOD can't see Naruto, who has loved Sakura forever, doing something like that with a Married Sasuke KNOWING he's married to Sakura. It's mind boggling. It's far fetched. It's difficult for me to swallow.
Naruto's personality...consenting to an affair? Mmm~ nah. I like that you tried to do something different tho. It is different I suppose.
schedule
December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
been waiting for this chapter forever! it was great, update soon!
schedule
December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap, you updated. And holy crap I caught it and am reviewing, what an amazing feat of actually doing stuff is this?
Hi, I have missed you, and this story. And shame on me for missing that last chapter, I have no idea where I was when it was updated but apparently it was nowhere near this site.
Anyway on to the reviewing shall I? I... do not know where to start. I liked it, ok so probably loved it would be more accurate, though it seemed like half of it sailed over my head it was still so fascinating, like watching a horror movie and knowing the outcome but still being enthralled by it all the same. When Itachi was mentioned I knew this would happen - I mean really, Itachi and Sakura in a fic that is semi depressing, seriously something like this was bound to happen- but it is also fascinating that Sasuke didn't have any sort of melt down but more of a quiet one, which only leaves more questions -and screaming for the story to continue, *hint*hint*- and wanting to know what happens next and how he reacts. Also... why doesn't he seem to know the feeling of Sakura's lips, when Naruto asked, I was very intrigued by that little tid bit.
I honestly can't wait to see what happens next but judging by past track records, yours and mine included it may be sometime till I am fulfilled, alas this shall have to tide me over till I am um... I don't know, at least until I can read the next chapter.
Now I need to get my ass off line and go to sleep so I can study for my final tomorrow before having to take it, curse the matter of having to actually pass these courses I take.
Until next time, thanks ever so much for updating, I will always love and adore your stories, and I hope that I can read the next chapter sometime soon.
Love, Jenn.
Hi, I have missed you, and this story. And shame on me for missing that last chapter, I have no idea where I was when it was updated but apparently it was nowhere near this site.
Anyway on to the reviewing shall I? I... do not know where to start. I liked it, ok so probably loved it would be more accurate, though it seemed like half of it sailed over my head it was still so fascinating, like watching a horror movie and knowing the outcome but still being enthralled by it all the same. When Itachi was mentioned I knew this would happen - I mean really, Itachi and Sakura in a fic that is semi depressing, seriously something like this was bound to happen- but it is also fascinating that Sasuke didn't have any sort of melt down but more of a quiet one, which only leaves more questions -and screaming for the story to continue, *hint*hint*- and wanting to know what happens next and how he reacts. Also... why doesn't he seem to know the feeling of Sakura's lips, when Naruto asked, I was very intrigued by that little tid bit.
I honestly can't wait to see what happens next but judging by past track records, yours and mine included it may be sometime till I am fulfilled, alas this shall have to tide me over till I am um... I don't know, at least until I can read the next chapter.
Now I need to get my ass off line and go to sleep so I can study for my final tomorrow before having to take it, curse the matter of having to actually pass these courses I take.
Until next time, thanks ever so much for updating, I will always love and adore your stories, and I hope that I can read the next chapter sometime soon.
Love, Jenn.
schedule
December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story now. It's just so stark and realistic. =)
schedule
May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please Continue this is a really intriging story, I like it alot.
Jamie ^.^g
Jamie ^.^g
schedule
April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I love this! You are one of the best authors around! I can't wait to read more, especially the whole Naruto/Sakura dynamic. Just one question though, why doesn't Sakura (who is known to have as short a temper as Tsunade) yell and scream at Sasuke, make him open up and reveal what he truely wants. I know you are trying to put Sakura in a quiet light, but, damn, she doesn't need to be a backseat driver in her own marriage. I hope to see some of her spunk back soon.
Oh, and where is Kakashi in all this? Somehow I don't see him as the 'I'm not going to butt my nose in' type... Just food for thought...
Neko
Oh, and where is Kakashi in all this? Somehow I don't see him as the 'I'm not going to butt my nose in' type... Just food for thought...
Neko
schedule
January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
need new chapterrr :) so good, i love all the different perspective, relationships are complicated :( they're never simple
schedule
October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I really love this story so far and am very interested in seeing where you might go with it. This is one of those oh so wonderfully bitter and sad stories which just makes your heart twist in that oh so good way. I for one, am really hoping that things work out for all the characters involved.
schedule
September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story i think it is brilliant that you have both men in love with Sakura but neither one is sleeping with her. UPDATE SOON!!!!
schedule
August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Seriously. It is extremely hard to find a well written Sasu/Saku fanfic but even harder to find one with Naruto that does not have either Sakura or Naruto bashing. And *gasps* God forbid that it actually has depth. THANK YOU!!! ^___^
Originally I stopped by on adultfanfiction.net because I just wanted to read some good Sasu/Saku smut but this is WAY better. Plus, aside from your friend Momo fan's fic, "Relax Sasuke" I couldn't even find good smut (by the way, I thought her fic was very good, she shouldn't be shy, be proud!! ^o^ As a matter of fact, if she has more fics that she's written but hasn't posted, you should encourage her to post them because aff.net is in serious need of quality writing.)
Sooooo, how long are you going to toture your fans and keep us waiting? If you reach the 6 month mark I'm going to start stalking you...
Originally I stopped by on adultfanfiction.net because I just wanted to read some good Sasu/Saku smut but this is WAY better. Plus, aside from your friend Momo fan's fic, "Relax Sasuke" I couldn't even find good smut (by the way, I thought her fic was very good, she shouldn't be shy, be proud!! ^o^ As a matter of fact, if she has more fics that she's written but hasn't posted, you should encourage her to post them because aff.net is in serious need of quality writing.)
Sooooo, how long are you going to toture your fans and keep us waiting? If you reach the 6 month mark I'm going to start stalking you...