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by KrickItat

schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The three of them should just get together and call it good.
person Dream-Toxin
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just want to scream at these people!!! That is if they were real. I love your story and the angst you put it omg! I realize that everyone is at fault here but I mean Sakura needs to finally corner her cheating husband and so called friend (he is sleeping with her husband for crying out loud, you call that friendship?) and tell them what is wrong! That she knew he was having an affair when she was 3 weeks pregnant and not to take it out on her that he was missing out cause he was to busy getting his kicks off somewhere else. I know it seems that I'm favoring her more then them but I've been in a similar situation so I guess that is why I want to see the guys suffer so much. Why did you have the baby die? Maybe Sakura should have a near death experience and that could make them suffer some and she could yell at her husband that the only reason she fought to stay alive was for her remaining child and not for some man who doesn't (she thinks anyway)even love her. Really you are a very very good storyteller and you really have a talent of getting your readers' emotions involved in your writing. I'm just livid here! There is a song that I was listing to while reading your story and in my opinion I think it goes really well with some of Sakura's feelings I think. You should listen to it, it's called " I Can't Make You Love Me" by Bonnie Raitt. I'm looking forward to an update.
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was sad...first she's having problems with her hubby now she looses a son poor girl....i just hope you make it up to her in this fic.... does naruto realize what he's doing or does he even know sakura knows...as always great work i love you update soon

p.s SAKURA RULES
person ItariShun
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I definetely wasn't expecting that. What a plot twist! Actually, there was a couple of those...death of Sakura's son and the fact that she brings Naruto food...I mean, Sakura knows Naruto and Sasuke are having an affair and yet, she still takes care of Naruto. How mind-boggling! I think you should definetely involve Sai somehow (as if it isn't already complicated enough:) )And um..yes...the happy ending...Is that even possible in this case? Should I be expecting a threesome ;)? Is a quick update too much to ask for ?
person ninjakitty
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah for an update!!
i just wanna beat the boys around the head to try and knock some sense into them. i have to wonder how sasuke feels about the death of his child?
still great writing and i look forward to the next chapter.
person Selow
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really intelligent piece of fiction and a joy to read. All the characters are human with their own flaws and good sides. I'm really interested in what will happen next.

(and the fluffwhore in me hopes they will all be a happy lovin' team 7 in the end of this xD)
person Anon
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg this is so sad and so beautiful. update soon
person rhaize
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how yer actually responding to yer reviewers, not many authors do that. I also really like the concept that in relationships, its usually not one person's fault, its a little of both. Many people don't seem aware of that, posting blame on one side :/ Is this gunna turn into a sasusakunaru? XD cuz it looks like its leading that way, seeing how naruto still likes sakura?
person Mageblood
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!
It’s so emotionally gut wrenching and I like the direction is seams to be going in!!
So tons of inspiration to you and please update as soon a possible!!!!
person jelliott
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Besides stumbling over a few grammatical errors here and there, I very much enjoyed this. The emotion that was put into it really did make me feel sad and tearful for all the parties involved. Your establishment of Sakura was well done, especially her thoughts and Sasuke's POV was heartfelt. I have a feeling that I just might burst into tears if I read Naruto's side of the story. This is premise is very relatable.

Again, a job truly well done!