rate_review Reviews

Ok, I have to review even though I'm not finished yet. That chapter 3...oh my gosh that was so hot. Wow was that hot. And after chapter 4 you said something about not having any real smut...are you kidding me?!? I'm not sure how you are defining smut but the BEST kind is exactly the kind you wrote, especially in chapter 3. Yep, it's all about the build-up, the lack of control, the chase... You name it however you want but that is what makes a scene hot. Not the "wham bam thank you ma'am we just had sex to prove our love" sort of thing. That's too typical & expected.

Your writing...LOVE IT!

And if this story isn't done... I'm begging you (lol you had begging in your story too which I also find hot in a story lol) please finish it!!!!!!!!!

wuaaaah why aren't you continuing this?? it SO GOOD!! *bawl*

Oh God this story is one of the best I've ever read !! Please, tell me you didn't abandon it ! It's so hot, and I love GenmaxKakashi ^^
Please, update soon, I'm addicted to this story...

I still badly want to read the denoument of this story, where the shit hits the fan...and I echo the sluttacious monsters who want a scene with Raido and Iruka, yeah. :D

wow i wish this was continued!! i'm usually into iruka/kakashi and genma/raidou, but you make this... oh, it's just the best!! please consider continuing this <3 <3 <3

i can't believe you abandoned this story when it's one of the view i'll add to my naughty bookmarks... it's perfect, so hot, so intoxicating!!! if you're still on aff.net you should really consider picking it up again, i'll be... your whore XD ok, just to say i let you know how much i liked it. mm.

Actually went and read the story now. I can definitely say, hawt! moar pls.

This is awesome! I absolutely love Kakashi, but to tell the truth, I've never thought of this pairing. I CAN'T WAIT to read more. I love your style!
Oh, and the Genma/Tsunade fling was priceless! I love how Shizune is freaking out because Tsunade is actually working.

hahaha I've only read the intro and I already have to leave a review. Just wanted to say that's the best intro ever:

"There may be some hetero, so don't be shocked."

Good thing you warned us. Those straights and their perverse ways. Completely destroys traditional values. :D

It's been so long I had completely forgotten about this story so it's nice to see you updating again! I was so happy to see Raidou brought into this, I thought Iruka definitely needed to have his own bit of fun, although I don't think I like that Raidou is involved with whatever plan Shikaku's got going on. I'm definitely looking forward to finding out how this all plays out, I hope we don't have to what as long for the next update! :)