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for Beautiful Dreamer

by antilogicgirl

person luxeflex
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks sooo much for updating ^^
I really wasn't expecting iruka/raidou but you already made me like that pairing. and genma was so funny when he woke up.
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please please please write more! I am waiting for more Genma action other than what I write and your story seems so cool! Is poor Iruka going to get any action? And what's with Shikamaru's dad? Can't wait to find out! I wish there was some way to get new chapter alerts like on FF but oh well. . . I'll just have to keep checking! :-)
person DevilLived
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! It looks like Iruka is in trouble. And Genma and Kakashi are having too much fun to help him. Though it is very hot fun.

Awesome chapter! I can't wait till the next one! (claps) Keep it up!
person luxeflex
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yaaay thank you so much for updating ^^
great chapter, too bad there's no smut, but the plot is getting quite exciting as well
can't wait to read what happens next
person mary
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and the plot thickens!!!! *grinning eviliy and rubbing hands like a maniac* will the persons involved be revieled soon?
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited for an update!!! I absolutely love this story!! Keep up the good work
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic and simply can't wait for an update!!

please hurry and update!!
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been holding my breath..but no update. Please don't drop this story. I love the plot and the pairing.
~The Flame Reviews~
person luxeflex
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please update the next chapter xD I can't wait to read what happens next
seriously, I'm not a fan of this pairing but you totally convinced me!
person Naoe Nobutsuna
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As I hoped and suspected that chapter was just the perfect ballance. I loved the way you managed to omit the actual smut and yet stil show the sizzling hot tension/action between both. I liked the way Kakashi began to reveal his possessivness. My personal opinion is that none of them would like to share (who in their right mind would wanna share a hot piece like Kakashi OR Genma with another party, no matter how close friends they are). Iruka turns out to be quite a piece of work too. I love the way you made him a devilish little creature and not the standart holier-that-saint guy type. I will wait for the next installment with trouble because patience is really not one of my virtues. BTW just now I noticed that Machi Yoko Naruto was yours - amazing story, I do hope its not abandoned, because its one of the VERY few stories about Naruto and Sasuke as a pair that I like (I confess I cannot stand Naruto/Sasuke or viceversa. Im Itachi/Naruto all the way}
Ganbatte ne