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by antilogicgirl

schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cool. I can't wait to find out who put the love potion into him!
person Villemo
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The biggest freak IMHO is...
Kakashi.
He can say "no", but he doesn`t. He participates willingly in *everything* ^^
That`s cute though ;)

btw, great story, I really enjoy reading it.
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schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who knew Iruka was such a kinky bastard? ;p Update soon!
person DevilLived
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! That was an awesome chapter. And I agree with you, Iruka is definetly the biggest freak out of all of them.

I can't wait until the next chapter; keep up the awesome work!
person Anise
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Kakashi/Genma they are working just so well together, although I do feel a little bad for Iruka being left out especially when you consider it's both his best friend and crush, maybe he can go find Raidou ;)
I bet the plan they come up with will be (if nothing else) very interesting and probably a little fun, I can't wait for the next part! I can't believe you don't have more reviews this turning out to be such a fun read :)
person yaoi_is_my_antidrug
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*fans self*

Wooooo. Yum. Genma, Kakashi... Iruka watching... loved the scene in the bar. Public semi-sex - hawt.

Genma tied up - *melts*

I really hope you can fit in a public sex scene. If not, I'm sure whatever else you do will still be awesome.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

person Naoe Nobutsuna
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, I loved this story. It's the first one I found that has a nice plotline, written exquisitely and of course featuring BOTH Genma and Kakashi. I love that pair and for the love of all cannot understand why there are so little fics about those dangerous and handsome guys. If they are a pair I don't really mind who's top, but probably they will share 50/50 I think. I certainly hope you will continue with this story... and of course as long as possible cuz Genma/Kakashi/Genma goodiness is SOOO hard to find, such beautifully written one even harder
Ganbatte and I will await impatiently the next update
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah! OMG, that was hot. I heart Genma/Kakashi.

Lol, Genma doesn't want to be bottem.

Crazy that he doesn't put two and two together and figure out that it was HIM who gave Kakashi those "battle scars." I wonder if he'll figure it out later?

Update soon! Keep up the awesome work!
person Anise
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you had Genma and Tsunade together, that is something I've never seen before and to be honest I don't think I'll every see again. I love the idea of Kakashi and Genma as a couple, it'll be fun to see Kakashi get molested by a sleep walking Genma-what these guys won't do for a mission ;)
Also I liked your Iruka in the first chapter he was fun with Genma, although I can't help but wonder what happened when he ran off after Kurenai.
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eeek! awesome

kakashi/genma has to be one of my fav yaoi pairings evah!

Thanks for your amazing stories