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for If Only...

by KitsuneFun

person Sara
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for continueing with the story. It was a pleasure to read.
person hisoka
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
even if you dont continue it i liked it thats actually a good cliffhanger ending letting everones minds wonder were ever their hearts desire,props
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ough...why won't you write a fourth?! T_T
person Allys
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, well thank you for writing the last 2 chapters anyway, that was really nice of you :D. I really liked the ending and how you tied it into the manga, it was sweet. And Well Done on not letting us bully you XD. Huggles, cause you're awesome, Allys.
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved this last chapter! You ended it at a good point. I'm glad they were able to be together for real. :)
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooo that was nice. in explicable connection: black magick or ... destiiiiiinyyyyyyy? *insert bad sci-fi styles voiceover* MORE ^.^
person Fourthiv
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, really think you should continue it. Perhaps, not super long as you have another story you're writing, but maybe a 5 chaptered story? It would definately be awesome, I can say that for sure. This chapter left me wanting so much more! I want them to be happy together.
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah I want to read more! This is fun and just who is that mysterious person with the crystal ball??
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the second part!!! I loved it!! It would be great if you ran with that plot and added more to this story! :)
person Allys
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so cool, whoa... XD. I love it, who's the dude with the crystal ball? The last person to have a crystal ball in Naruto was Sandaime. I had so forgotten about that until just now, LOL. And here I was hoping that the damn teme had remembered to lock his door, XD, I guess that doesn't matter now. Very nice. As for continuing, write as it comes to you, if it comes to you. Never force it, despite what everyone says, yeah we all want to read it, but it's not the same if you force it. I love that Sasuke feels comfortable enough to admit his feelings since he's "alone". It makes for such interesting possibilities XD.