rate_review Reviews

I love this story, it's heart-wrenchingly beautiful, I really hope you finish it!

great chapter. can't wait for the next one.
Rox

I definitely think you should continue! It has a great start and is an interesting read. My only suggestion would be to break up your paragraphs a bit so it's easier on the eyes. Other than that, can't wait to see more! Hugs & Kisses!

hm... i like the plot so far and for being 'just an artist' you're a pretty good writer. please update! ^^

oh, please do continue, I like it so far!! Looking forward to more. (Btw, very well written!)

You should definitely continue. I like Kakashi/Sakura fics, and this intro caught my attention. you say you are an artist, well, use that to your advantage. I am an artist as well, and I write too. Just visualize it in your mind, and write what you see. It's that easy. Pretend you are the third person off to the side, shooting a video. What do they say? What do they do? What details do you want your readers to have in order to fully understand you story? Wht developing events happen throughout? Just little advice, but hey, I'm an amateur myself, so what do I know, eh?

Kiyasume

P.S. Have a cookie. It was a great beginning. *hands super yummy cookie over* BTW, read my own fic, and tell me what you think. I love people's opinions.

I really think you should continue to write this story, you seem to have a knack for it.

The story was a nice consistant read...there were no lull and my interest was peaked throughout. I would most enjoy reading another chapter!

I think this is a good and interesting start to your fanfic. Please continue on, I'd love to read more.

Id like to read more. I think this story has potential, a basic good start and already a slowly building plot. I look forward to reading the next chapter if you decide to go forth with this.

Oy. Please continue your story. : ) This is a very promising start.