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for Beasts of Burdens

by BleedingStarGoddess

schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this just blew me away! I can't wait to see the next chapter of a story this great! Please update soon!
person MeLaiya
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooooo, Im intrigued. Please update soon and keep up the good work
person oohshiny
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS. STORY. IS. GREAT. all i gotta say. other than that, just email me when you update, meh email address is deannathx@comcast.net
person moo
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay you finally updated this! plz plz plz! update soon! it is an interesting story and i can't help but want more
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. Is Sasuke a traitor because he left to find Itachi or was it something else entirely? And Naruto is taking him back to the village now? Or will he end up keeping him with him?

I like this so far and I look forward to your next update.
person littleolmee
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting plot, I'd love to see more of it. Keep up the great work.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What will happen to the stranger when he comes to? Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!^-^
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool. Can't wait to read more.

=)
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Can't wait to read more!