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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like see when naruto and sasuke meet and what will happen.
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Innnnnnntesting.....
nice idea and a good beginning, but i'm going to have to say you rambled abit here....^^;; i honestly don't like critsaizing ppl but you did...
nice idea and a good beginning, but i'm going to have to say you rambled abit here....^^;; i honestly don't like critsaizing ppl but you did...
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would like very much to see an update. Soon. Very soon. This story has me intrigued beyond reason.
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...thats really deep. Its so true people suck. I like how you described how Naruto wanted to survive, the injustice of it all on both sides. Well written. please keep updating!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really good, update soon so I can read more XD
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Please continue!!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have an interesting start going on here. Poor baby Naruto, I really enjoyed how you presented this so far, hope you stick with it. I'll keep an eye on this story.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this start was really good. i like the fact that the baby broke the seal (if only for the fact that kyuubi can return to konoha and scare the hell out of the villagers... if he wanted to). i hope you continue this, and, as i'm sure you will, i hope it's soon!!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was awesome, poor naru-chan T-T what's gonna happen to him? please continue ^-^
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm, very fairy tale, nicely woven and poetic. sometimes when people write in a style and voice like that it's just annoying, and it gets in the way of what they're trying to say and i just feel like im struggling through joyce or something, but it worked here, it fit with the way the story was going. im intrigued by this, i don't think i've read anything quite like that before, go for it! Ganbatte! ^.^