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i am amazed at this!!! i really have no words.. i loved it.. a little too realistic if you ask me, lol. but still.. wow!!!

That was awesome and full of win. Great job

This was hilariously adorable and my first instinct is to beg you for more!! and say you can't just leave it there and hit you my puppy-dog eyes jutsu, but LOL, I'll behave XD. *huggles u* It was awesomely sweet otherwise and I adore Naruto's determination, and Sasuke's well... lol, adorableness XD. He kicked him out of the bush XD hehehehe, I know I'm just stating the obvious, but I think it's really funny. And sweet in an odd way. You should totally write a sequel XD, on your own time of course, LOL, I guess I just never want your stories to end huh? But seriously we have to find out the truth behind Sasuke's 'lame' little "I was... horny" excuse XD, LOL, so much for being good. Sorry *huggles* XD Thank you for this sweetie it made me smile on an otherwise- Why did I get out of bed again? day. * chuu*

I liked this story, I wish you'd continue. I want to know if Sasuke does get talked out of his turn.

LMAO hahahahahahahahahaaha


ahhhh... finally.. a story that captures the awkward and unsatisfying realism of unexperienced virginal sex. too freaking funny. that was simply not hot at all. I applaud you with standing ovation. hehehehehehe. ^^ Keep up the great work. I really enjoyed this.

OH MY GOD.

you updated wolves!!!! [APPLAUSE!!] fantastic update. one of the best naruto POV smut ever. you brought out the awkward in sex. LOLz. you make this pairing so balanced. neither of them are too imposing on one another. [even in sex. haha.]

great! keep it up! :D

Ah, geez XD. I was laughing through this whole thing. Wonderfully awkward, their first time. XD I could see it happening just like this in the series. Naruto gets off too fast, and Sasuke left grumbling (poor thing, like a half a second of sex and that's it XDD)... And the bickering in between. Everything. So cute!

Oh wow. You get a zillion points for the reality of this latest update. Just... wow. I'm so impressed there wasn't this whole 'oh sure I didn't use lube but it'll be fine' sort of garbage you see everywhere else (I admit I'm as guilty as everyone else on this sort of fantasy level). I'm just... And poor Sasuke! I mean... shesh poor Sasuke. Naruto could have at least given him a blow job after that fob up. Gesh.

Anyway, excellent writing! Keep up the amazing work.

awwwwwwwwwwww....that anding was cute ^__^...wow...Naruto....way to be lame XD....i loved it XD

Hehe, Hey sweetie I have come to leave a formal reivew XD. LOL, This was Hilarious! Seriously. In the beginnign I was all Oh Godd!! Stooooppp!!! Can you see me turning red like a cherry?? (*snicker* Still can't believe that hand went there XD) And then I was OMG!!! LOL, NO!! the truth is Not an option!!! A bug crawled up there or something!! Not the truth!!! *dies* LOL Yeah - Deny! Deny! DENY! and LMAO!! Sasuke's reaction was Priceless XD, from the first very innocent, "What?" *Snicker*. I was all LOL yeah you breathe baby cause I'm having a hard time between guffaws XD. And Oh God i'm only on page four I'm going to DIE!! That boy is too God damned honest for his own good XD. Hehehe, LOL, so you get the point XD. You had me seriously animated and all over the place. And there was way to much warm and fuzziness in me right then (was Bursting) The part with the nipples was hott and adorable all at once. And then *snicker* “You...” Naruto laughed nervously. “...trying to tell me something?” I was ROLLING!! Seriously thank god for being alone cause people would have been worried. I Loved how Sasuke's face/mood kept changing, so honest, like a little window into a previously locked and battened down fort. I agree with Naruto, he should show emotion more often XD. *Snicker* Naruto and his uber surprising self XD. "I have lube" LOL, Love how it came out so fast he even surprised himself XD. And I don't know why, but the two of them sitting up all half dressed and rubbing their fingers to see if the technically-not-lube was slippery enough, made me really happy. I have no idea why, LOL. I guess cause it was the moment of Huge decision, and they sat there together basically holding hands ♥ And Zomg!! LOL, just remembered the "Hellloo Gorgeous!!" from way back when XD. o.0, LOL, that does it there is no way I can tell you about all the things I love about this without it be as long as, if not longer than this. *Shakes head* I loved everything!! Right down to the end when the sex turned out to be not quite XD. LOL, Poor Sasuke *snicker* Naruto shoulda just let him do it XD. LOL, Not that I think he could have lasted much longer, but LOL, at least he had a clue XD *snicker* XD *shakes head* I can't stop grinning even now. *Loves on you* Thank you honey and I'm excited about this epilogue XD. *MWAH*