rate_review Reviews

Wow. You are my hero for writing such an awkward sex scene complete with awkward foreplay. Neither of them really knew what they were doing and as a result they were clumsy and impatient and frustrated and embarrassed and nervous and it was awesome because it was so realistic. Anyway, I think if they ever did have sex it would be exactly like this. Spur of the moment, uncomfortable, and Sasuke trying find some sort of control in the situation and then getting pissy (with good reason I must admit) and Naruto having perverted thoughts the whole time (which, you can't really blame him for considering the situation) and being a bit of an idiot.

I've always felt that Naruto and Sasuke will never fully understand their emotions especially towards each other, regardless of whether it's friendship or something more than that (although I doubt it will ever go beyond friendship in canon; *sighs*).That's not to say I don't enjoy when they get a bit mushy, but I like it when they're stubborn too. Looking forward to the epilogue!

P.S. I have a rather shameful confession to make. I'm a huge fan of your story Almost Sucks (that's not the shameful part) and I keep attempting to write a review for it because it is so wonderful, but I can never seem to put my thoughts into words and I end up babbling and then deleting what I've written. *cringes*

That was really lovely and cute. I like how you wrote Naruto's denial, and his ways to fix his 'problem.' Sasuko was definitely excellent brain food, wasn't it?

that was just so funny!

Not sure why it's called wolves. But I'm reading and enjoying your story. :D

Naruto has an obsession with Sasuke's nipples! XD

this is so freaking hilarious!

I love that EVEN in a sex dream Naruto still has competetive issues Sasuke

“You’re so much better at drinking than I am,” I choked on my cornflakes with that line XD

but I guess thats what makes NaruSasu so special :D

I love your work, I've been reading Almost Sucks and its one of my favourite stories.

From a fangirl to a fanboy, I LOVE YOU!!! :D

Awesome work!

Lol, poor Naruto. He's so very confused.

Very good job!

Okay, that was just adorable... I don't know if that is the appropriate response, but it is so cute to watch Naruto's brain screw with him!!

i love how naruto's logic flows here. it's like reading a how-to manual on how to operate naruto's brain. i love your writing style.

question though.. what's with "wolves"? ehehe. it's nothing. just curious.

Apparently, it hasn't clicked into Naruto brain that Sasuko really is sasuke in disguise. Well, he is a baka, but in a lovable way. Hurry with the next chapter!!

I love your stories!

I have read your other NaruSasu fic Almost Sucks on ff.net and you said you had written a new fic called wolves so I came over here and I love this as well!
The way you write Naruto and Sasuke allways makes me smile:)

Looking forward to the next update!