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by Mashiro

person Nanaka
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* I loved it and can't wait to read more
person LemonsLuver
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Mashiro, you don't recongize the sn But I'm one of your Loyal Fans that reviews Almost Sucks!!!(which btw is still great, and hope You doing great in Japan!!)
....Just wanted to say I love the whole design of the Fic......Naughty Naruto FINALLY!!!!! There's always Naughty Sasuke, but NEVER any Naughty Naruto stories!!!
Poor Sasu-kun......can't hold his beer very well XDDDDD
Naruto is a PERV!!!! -YATTA!- I love Pervy Naru-chan!!!!
Can't wait to read more of this funny short story.....and you should write more in AFF.....its funner (not a word) and Smuttier here too! x3
person LemonsLuver
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing another CHAPTER!!!!!

‘Eat us,’ they seemed to be saying. ‘We taste as good as we look. Won’t you suck on us a bit? You can touch a little first if you’d like.’
Nipples TALK??!?!?!?!!? WOW that shocked me....I don't like Naruto's dream >P
Just kidding, your know Naru-chan is just in denile, GIVE up Naru-chan, you know you WANT Sasu-kun X3
These chaps are sooo short XDDDDDDDD
Ok I can wait for the next chapter, and read Almost Suck's new chap >.>;;
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
L'OMG teehee Sasuko! >.< thats like going so far into denial you come out the other side, all sticky and confused. still, Sasuko, thats an excuse to put Uchihas in awesome hemmed up schoolgirl uniforms two sizes too small ... AH an EVEN better Uchiha clan uniform, not to mention greatest offense EVER, all enemies will get nosebleeds and have to crawl away to take cold showers. ima write a letter to Kisimoto right now!! ^.^
person kaururyu
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well that was... cute. :D interesting writing style. loved it. keep it up. :D
person Karas Kraehe
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GHAAAAA!
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!!!
I MUST KNOW! XO
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahahah, Sakura saves the day (though not really). Poor Sasuke, imaging having Naruto screetch into your ears when you have a hang over (wince).

Nother awesome chapter, very entertaining. Update soon!
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
TeeHee Naruto may be in denial, but his little brain know what it wants. ^.^ i'd sign the petition for official Uchiha clan costume change, considering the only two members left would certainly look more than good in it *brain melts* ^________________^
person animehead
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I like this. Very realistic and fun. Naruto reminds me of myself in this. I act just like him when I'm drunk, I think. It's hard to tell when you're drunk and all. I can't wait to read the rest of this. The flow of it is wonderful. It gives you that relaxed feeling. Anyway, I'l be waiting patiently for your update. Take care.
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. It was really realistic how you made Naruto try and count stars with his clones hehe. The chapter title is also amusing, who would have thought? Please keep writing!