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for Someone Else's Eyes

by ursweetheartless

schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i remember this story, been a while. happy to see it again and with 2 chapters i hadnt read last time yay!! itachi is too much of an uber top *pouts* but i really cant see either naruto or sasuke as they r in this story stepping up to take him on sooo i'll move on lol

yay!! sas and naruto go off to the country together. they are absolutely ADORABLE aawwww trying to protect each other, snuggling... so sweet.

keep it coming homes!
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you've updated this story. I can't wait for what happens next! heehee <3
person kaimono
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm...seems like i finally got a little less opinionated towards itachi and sasuke pairing; as long as naruto is there somewhere, i am able to find this story enjoyable. please do continue. =D
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah! it came back! *huggles you* aaahhhmmmm lol i'm pretty sure i'm gonna be the ONLY person NOT begging you for a threesome with kakashi, we already have the itachi/sasu/naru threesome thats good enough for my threesome quota x) pluuuusss the sasunaru from when sas visited naru was so sweet i'm inclined to scream "chuck off kakashi an leave my 2 boys alone!" but as i said, i know i'll be in the minority so whatever u decide is cool still
person Allys
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the turn the story's taken, it's strange and interesting, and I don't mind at all that the chapter wa short. I'm actually pleased that you thought enough of your readers to ask for help. As for putting in the threesome, you probably already know I would love it if you did, but if it's giving you that much trouble then maybe you shouldn't. There are many alternative routes that you can take. Sasuke is really drunk and probably won't remember all of it, so you do a sort of weird morning flashback sequence, where we get little bits and pieces of the lemon through Sasukes hazy pov, but you don't have to wrie a whole comprehensive piece. That way it could still be really hot, but since it really isn't, as you say, the focus of the story, it won't hurt if it's sketchy. *hugs* I'm just thrilled you're writing this again ♥
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well my dear, I think that a kaka/sasu/naru threesome would be awesome, and maybe itachi could find out about it later and all hell will break loose. haha. as for the central theme of the plot, you could make it romance, either between Itachi and Sasuke, or Itachi, Sasuke, and Naruto. There are so many places this story can go, and I wish you the best!
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you started this up again! omfg, that latest chapter was hawt! What can I say? I love Uchihacest. I'm wondering where this story is going, though, if Naruto would be more involved or not. haha. The selfish me is saying, "Leave him out!" but at the same time, he makes a nice addition to Itachi/Sasuke.

Please write more! and thanks again!
person Allys
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for updates!!! I love this story XD and can't wait to see where you've decided to take it. I'm so happy there are going to be more. Thank your friend profusely for me and thank you too *hugs* That was amazingly hot!! And the beginning where everyone was running around like idiots was really funny XD. LOL, they lost Sasuke, I was like and you've only just noticed this now?? *smirks* Sasuke quick like ninja XD. *Loves on you*♥
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaww man! i wish you had continued this story, i'm really intrigued by it
person Minjin
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfic!!! Its so good!!!! Oh yeah please writeeeeeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeee!!! I love the way you are developing the SasuNaru!!!!!! But i also like their threesome so hot!!! And your writing makes me picture it all out *_* so good!!!