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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter!
Omg u talked about me o.o it made me happy ^^
yeah its a bit hard to write in English being Portuguese...
er...I mean... I have A's at English but when I have to talk or write something I just...my mind shuts its power off u.ú but I always try my best. Now about the fic...omg its getting soooooooooo cool *-*
Naruto and Hinata make such a cute pair *-* I hope he ends up with her in the manga >.<
keep up the good work *-*
\m/ rock on!
Omg u talked about me o.o it made me happy ^^
yeah its a bit hard to write in English being Portuguese...
er...I mean... I have A's at English but when I have to talk or write something I just...my mind shuts its power off u.ú but I always try my best. Now about the fic...omg its getting soooooooooo cool *-*
Naruto and Hinata make such a cute pair *-* I hope he ends up with her in the manga >.<
keep up the good work *-*
\m/ rock on!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!! WHATS THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU? After that little stunt in three seconds I was ready to kill you. Do you know how hard it is to close the seventh gate? ask lee about it he will tell you it aint no picnic. other then that great job so far. Seriously, I cannot seem to find any real complaints so be happy. that and update soon. Also, I bet the guy who laughed is Gaara.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil beginning of the chapter but nice story, keep going.
There, now you've got a review by a German too.^^
There, now you've got a review by a German too.^^
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello again. first off, chapter 8...ROCKS!!! second number 9 a cliffy you tease. And third Konohamaru and Hanabi pairing? I like. So far your story has yet to disappoint and I hope you keep up the fantastic work. Oh a question, is Nekomata (2 tail cat) and Scihibi (I think I just misspelled that) the 7 tail cat related? If so Hinata has a "cousin" sort of.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep this up, i want to read more.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The sex scene was GREAT! And then having them walked in on nice. I like it keep it up... I think it would be hilarious if Sakura walked in on those to as they were climaxing... Update as often as you are able this is awesome.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like how it is all coming together. But who is the mystery guy in the sand. How does he know Naruto Uzumaki. And where is Sasuke and Kabuto heading off too.. Please update soon
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter I like the fight scene and what happened to Naruto's eyes. What is going to happen between Hanabi and Konohomaru... Is Naruto and Hinata going to restart the Hyuuga clan with Hanabi when she gets older but will she be with Konhomaru
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I've been reading your fic since almost 5 days ago and its soooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool *-*
I mean, everyday I'm waiting for a new chapter. You really got talent for writing ^^
keep up the good work! NaruHina rullez *-*
sorry about my bad english -.- its cuz I'm portuguese
I mean, everyday I'm waiting for a new chapter. You really got talent for writing ^^
keep up the good work! NaruHina rullez *-*
sorry about my bad english -.- its cuz I'm portuguese
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still good and staying that way, keep up the good work man!