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for Always With You

by Sean

schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Konohamaru get a girlfriend. Hinata and Naruto can go into heat. Something hapen to Naruto eye.Cant wait to see want hapen. Keep up the good work.
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, good update. Had me laughing nonstop, especially at the end. Dam hyuugas. Anyway, great update and i will look forward to the next one so please do it soon. As for the snow...,... that snow just started to hit up where i live, lets see how much we get.
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm back. Once again I love your story please keep up the great work. I can't wait for Naruto's side effects to kick in (Kyuubi Chidori!) Hinata's going to be PISSED at Itchia. After all good or bad family is still family. Please keep up the great work and don't forget to squeeze in more LEMON (Naru/Hina).
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schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story continue as you are... just try to update it regularly. Good stuff. I can't wait to see Naruto's "perks" and more demon action!
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job, but i think you might be in need of a beta. If you would like my assistance just email me and I will gladly help out. Other then that great job with the story so far and I will be looking forward to the next chapter. Please update soon.
cheers
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. But...Nekomata is the 2 tail, and its already been used in the manga. The 7 tail is the Kaku a ...oh don't get mad. BADGER!!! I know weird, but still I love your story so far. Sorry I just know the legend don't kill me. (ON hands and knees)
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I am hope you are jokeing about them dieing. That will be to sad. I hope you keep up the good work
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schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay I'm back again, still love your story. And a apology if you think I'm being rude. So i'm sorry and once again keep up the good work.
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well what is going to happen when Tsunade tells Naruto about Hinata might die. What will his reaction be. I hope she lives. Naruto is a good guy and he needs a woman like Hinata to love him...
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story I like how it is all going. But could it be true. Hinata might be a Jinchuriki... I would like to see an update soon please