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Yay!!!!!!!!!!
good update, well done. As for the massacre, I like the idea, but try to do it in a sensible way, I think you know what I mean. Also, Hanabi should be good, Not for any peticular reason other then the fact that I am finally writing a story andf In it Hanabi is a horrible evil bitch. Its gonna be funny. :)

Also, yes, i noticed that dragonheart was started up again and I am happy. =]
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Keep up the good work and update soon. if u want any help with anything just email me, even if it is just to kick around ideas.

I'm all for a massacre of the Hyuga clan. Everyone dies but Hinat, Hanabi, and Neji. Hanabi, please be a good guy. All in all, you have a pretty good story. Just clean up your writing a bit, and try not to make it seem so rushed.

your work is amazing keep it up

Hi I love your story so far and I hope you keep up the great work. A Hyuuga massacre sounds alot like what happened with the Uchihas. So I'm sorry to say...no. Hanabi I think she should be good even loving of her sister. Oh by the way the Legendary Bijuu of Five Tails is the Houkou (Elemental Dog). So I guess Hinata might sprout cute doggy ears and a cute little dog tail? Diffently Kiba vs Naruto time when she's in heat!

Wow! I really like Hinata is a demon to. I like how you make the girl read Icha Icha and how Naruto writes it. I hope you completes it and not just stop. To many story like that. I wish you luck and hope you update.

Nice story. I like how you made Hinata different but the same. I hope to see another chapter up soon

Good update. I will look forward to the next chapter. For some reason I am hoping for a bloody hyuuga masacre. But then again I can say the same thing for half of kanoha. Oh ya, the name of the ramne stand is Ichiraku`s

ROTFLOL. bout friggin time. U dont know me, wich is probly for best, but i have seen u round alot. As it happens i spend way too much time reading and ur name always seems to show up on the reveiw boards. that and i am pretty sure i have read some stories that you have beta read for. Just have to say good job on the story so far. It seems to be going alittle bit fast though. Maybe you should try to slow down the pace alittle bit more. Other then that no real complaints. Guess i will have to write a story now, seems like I am being left out of the group of people who like naru/hina fics and have written a story. Dunno, maybe in the future. either way keep up the good work.

Great story, bad cliches, and amusing grabs at practically standardised Naruto Fic story points :P I like it a lot and am looking forward to the rest of the chapters.

Oh yeah and thanks for not using the "The Fourth is my father" bit, that is really getting old, I understand why people think it but geez.

Anyways thanks for the great fic, if you need a hand with beta or anything I'm game to help.

Very interesting start! Especially with Hinata seemingly being thrown out of the Hyuga Clan at the end. I'm very much looking forward to seeing what you have in mind next >:-)