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for The Last Time

by MuseMistress

person summerwind
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad! I know you said it would take you a while to post up the story you said you would write for me I haven't seen it yet Please write it!
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you!

.....sigh. So sad. Sigh. As usual, I loved it. I read it through a few times, just to get the full impact. It's beautiful. Really like the lines: "Iruka didn't need lips..." and "He made up his mind years ago..." and *all* of paragraph 3 and 4. And the "Not for the first/last time" part. Ouch.

This is very good. Don't feel bad for making it depressing; there are not enough well written sad stories here. You are filling an important void. :)