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WOW... and THANK YOU. It really means a lot to me to recieve a review like that.

Yes Sapphire and Jade are Raven's cousins but as for them seeming like an evil genin squad, I guess I never thought of it quite like that. I was going for dark and mysteryous to be honest with you.

As for more stories with Raven and his team, well... This series is mainly focused around Raven and Hinata's relationship with Raven being the main character. Jade and Sapphire will pop up fairly regularly throughout the series though they won't have much of a major impact until later.

Don't worry I'm planning on writting a few stories focusing on what each of the girls is doing while the rest of the series is going on. Not really spin-offs persay so much as Missing Moment Collections.

Where is Naruto at when everything is going on right now.. Is Naruto out training or is he dead from fighting Orochimaru/Sasuke. What happened to the main character of the Story NARUTO... I am glad you answered my question but what about this new one.. Keep up the great work

Sorry I forgot to mention it in the story that the story takes place during the time that Naruto is way from Konoha traing with Jyria. I guess I just assumed everyone would be able to figure aout that given th time line I was using. Don't worry though the number one loud mouth unprodictable knuckle head ninja will be retuning soon enough I just it would be easier to get Hinata with Raven without Naruto around to complicate matters.

I have to say that this was one of the best naruto fanfics i have ever read. You introduced the character raven and his two cousins(hope i got that right) like they were some evil genin squad but gradually turned them around to be really great characters that seemed to fit well in the series. I cannot wait to read more of your fics, especially ones with raven, saphire and jade in them. Great job and i hope you write more. -Botched

Yeah my first review ^_^ LOL.

Raven is from the Hiroku Clan. Like the Hyuga Clan Hiroku is one of the oldest noble clans in Konoha. At least in my Naruto Universe. Raven is the youngest child of the clan's current leader so even though he's refered to as sama he's not the heir. At least not yet, sorry, I let that bit of information slip when I wrote the first chapter of the third story before the other two were finished.

Why their marrage was arranged and what happened to Raven's mother will be fully explained in the next story in what I'm calling the Shadow Chronicles. For now this story is mainly about laying the ground work in hopes of getting readers vested in Raven and Hinata's relationship.

Thank you for your review and I hope you keep reading because things only get better from here on out.

I would enjoy very much being your Beta. Just email me at kuro_kama@yahoo.com and let me know when you want to start and what exactly it is you want me to do. I think I can keep up with your pace, when I start things, I like to get them done as soon as possible, so I hope to live up to your expectations.

Who is this Raven guy. And what happened to his mom and why is he and Hianta arranged to get married... I am curious to find out more.