rate_review Reviews

i enjoyed this pairing and i think that you definitely have talent, but this fic seems like it could use a little clarification. i get the gist of it i think, but there's something that's needed to make all of those random thoughts tie in with her present situation (with hidan). what i'm trying to say is, why do her teammates, their late sensei asuma, and the pregnant kurenai play such an important role in her relationship with hidan? is she with him just to feel something? is she even with him of her own free will? you make it sound as if they have done it before and if so then how did it began? and why would he want to kill her at this point? i think that with a little tweak here and there you could make this story exceptional. this is not a pairing i have seen before and i love it. so, there's my 2 cents. i hope that what i said made some kind of sense. keep up the good work, and i'll be on the lookout for more of your work. ; )
akasha

Finally someone getting into these awesome characters

i applaud you for that id like to see more het with hidan and ino dosnt get nearly enough love