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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thats some crazy shit, kinda wierd but ok
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Diffent form of Hyuugaincest. I like it. I hope that Naruto does get back with Hinata in the next chapter. And maybe even Naruto+Hinata+Hanabi? But still I like the originality of this idea. +++++Good Work
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah... Yeah. Definetly didn't see that one. Pretty good though I'd suggest using different paragraphs each time a different character speaks, thinks or acts. It's just less confussing that way. Other then that overall it's pretty good.