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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

person Fayth Fable
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is so interesting. I haven't been able to stop reading since I started. Both Itachi and Naruto are still in character, despite their situation, that must have been hard to do. I can't wait to see Sasuke's reaction when he finds out and just what is Itachi teaching Naruto? Why would he have to die?
Great story. Best I've read so far. I really hope you update soon. Please let me know when you do. :)x
person Nipsyo
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello :)
I've been checking for updates and just now read the story again from the beginning. I still love it a lot and it's still one of my favorite ItaNaru stories. I wonder if you're ever going to finish it? It didn't look like you've been active on the site at all.

I hope everything's alright with you. :/

All the best,
Nipsyo
person YaoiBatman
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just noticed this last chapter!!! I loved it and I hope you'll update soon, but even if you don't I'll be waiting anyway. ~_^ I love your writing skills.
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next update. I can't even tell where its going? is Naruto going to go as a missing nin now just so that he can stay with Itachi? Is Sasuke going to still wanna kill his brother even though Naruto clearly cares for him, or is that going to make him wanna kill his brother even more!?!? *squeals* Heres a cookie! Update soon! <3
person DemonicKitsune-chan
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME! IT'S SO KICK ASS! XD
UPDATE NOW! NOW MAN, NOW! XD
I LOVE IT! IT'S AWESOME! XD
>O< *FANGIRL SQUEAL*
d.k.-chan
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story! I love the way you write and the way you portrayed the characters. I love the slow start and the careful build up and the way the relationship between Naruto and Itachi changes and grows. And I love your kissing scenes - they were well worth the wait ;) They are so detailed without being clinical. Somehow you have managed to infuse them with so much feeling I can't possibly say how much I love those scenes :) So you definately don't have to worry about them ;)
The thought of things yet to come cause fluttering in the pit of my stomach. Will the rescue team leave Naruto and Itachi alone? What does Itachi mean saying Naruto will kill himself? (Faking his death obviously, but will others believe it?) What will Akatsuki do when they realize there is no Kyuubi to extract? Will Naruto join Akatsuki? I don't believe he could, but will Akatsuki leave them be or will they have more trouble from that direction?
Ooooh, I'm so exited I'm bouncing in my seat! I can't wait to read the next part! I hope you keep writing! :D
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg I love your story please do continue and update soon. XD
person Nipsyo
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my damn, you've updated! Thank you!

It's been such a long time since I had time to read any fanfiction, and now that I finally started going through the fics again, you have this lovely chapter here waiting for me to read it! <3 Nice to hear that you're having an easier time now, I hope you're still well and stressless. :D Whatever ending you feel is the best one for this story, go with it! And please have fun while writing it :)

Thanks for making my day,
Nipsyo



person Nipsyo
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Right, it seems that it cut off the rest of my review. :j

Just wanted to say that I'm happy to hear that you're having an easier and a more stressless time now. And whatever ending you feel is the best one for this, go for it and please have fun while writing it!

Thanks for making my day,
Nipsyo
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chap