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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

person Rosebud
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story kicks ass!
I love Itachi/Naruto and this has to be one of the best stories I've read!
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!
I'm dying to see what happens next! XD
person Amaya
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I just got a chance to read the new chapter! Kinda late I know but oh my goodness that was so great! I think I'm going to need a circus tent to mop up all the drool. I so <3 ItaNaru!!! *hugs* thank you so much for the newest chapter!
person oliea34
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO AMAZINGLY HOT!!!
person Qiana
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This so good I love yaoi!, and I love Itachi. Update soon please
person Mey
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rulz review:
Woooooooooooh!!!! Excelent kiss ^_____^
I drooled all over the keyboard >__<
Now, seriously, Sasuke is on the loosers side. How can he compete against that psycho smexy brother of his? Duh...
And Naruto's lack of selfcontrol rulz xD if it wasn't for him, non of these awsome factts would have happened (that and your most worshipped bunnyes xD).
Flirting Sai rulz also... though in a much more awkward way... I mean, his personality was the least appealing thing on earth, and now he can make the ladies squeel... that's what's called a fast learner xD
Thanks again for the update and for the answers ^^
ItaxNaru RUUUULZ ^________^
P.S.: Keisuke also rulz, but non the less, he's disgusting... weird combination xD
person kkk
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
By the way really brave of Naruto to issue that challenge. *goes & comfort (molest) Sasuke in his uber gay outfit*
person Iori
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh so good. That last scene was just wonderful. Such a passionate kiss without being overtly sexual. Nicely done. I am liking this story very much and will continue to keep and eye on it. Still loving your Itachi.
person kkk
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You gave us a cliffie on the previous chapter then you started the next chapter without answering what we've been dying to know till the very end. You are soooo Evil. I was tempted to just skip the part w/ the rescue team to find out about the kiss already.
I think in this chapter Sai proved to be a better person at finding out information from women than Jiraiya. At least he comes of as a charming young man instead of a perverted old geezer *shivers*. At first when i was reading it I was wondering what happened to the socially inept nin until he took out his icha icha *lol*. I had to go back & read it again because at first I thought it was a Root manual or something until i read Kakashi's name.
Okay I did not expect that *pinches nose*. That has to be the hottest *scorching really* kiss i have ever read. I mean WOW!!! If that's my reaction to a kiss, imagine what the lemon is going to be like. Thanks for giving us a little something to tide us over. I also have to say that I like how you ended the kiss without it getting out of control. Usually most of the kiss I've read ends with someone interrupting or them having to be someplace.
Thank you for responding to our reviews & thank you for the chapter.:)

person Kamikyo
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter ended just too sweet^^. lol, sai as sex lady killer? never thought asbout that one^^ I neally fell from my chair laughing^^. Will Naruto ever get his chakra back? Will Ita-chan remove the seal? I really hope so. A helpless Naruto is the worst for fighting scenes, I think. But a caring Ita-chan is just to sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter! Bye^^
person Mitsuko
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yew!~I love you I love you I love you! (fans herself) and they were ony kissing! Hahah go Sai!