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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My favorite one liner to close the chap *thumbs up*. Ah, don't worry, your response to my question as more or less what i thought, you made perfect sense. Have u been reading the manga? Seems like we'll be seeing a Naruto/Sasuke/Itachi reunion soon. *another thumbs up*. So now you're caught up on both sites. There's a chance though that i'll mostly review on here since i'm always on AFF, but read and review i shall. Can't wait for the next update!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh I have an unbelievably wide smile on myface right now :D lol, I don't need to tell you that the way you write your kisses is awesome right? You practicaly had me drooling over that *shudders* hotness at its best :D
As to the other part of the chapter Kisuke stealing a kiss from Sasuke made me indignant on teme's behalf loool but yeah and Sai was showing off his flirting skills heh ^_6 he can come and get info from me anytime lol
On the other hand, the fact that the others are searching for Naruto and worried about him makes me feel guilty for enjoying the ItaNaru moments because Itachi is really the bad guy who Naruto's best friend hates. Despite the lemons I'm already starting to feel angsty about how this will end looool (I tend to worry needlessly abput things). It's actually the first time I've read a full length fic on this pairing and the questions in my head are so many loool but you're doing a great job and really making me love this pairing so can't wait for your next chater ^_6
As always, thanks for the great update, you made my day ^_^
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
As to the other part of the chapter Kisuke stealing a kiss from Sasuke made me indignant on teme's behalf loool but yeah and Sai was showing off his flirting skills heh ^_6 he can come and get info from me anytime lol
On the other hand, the fact that the others are searching for Naruto and worried about him makes me feel guilty for enjoying the ItaNaru moments because Itachi is really the bad guy who Naruto's best friend hates. Despite the lemons I'm already starting to feel angsty about how this will end looool (I tend to worry needlessly abput things). It's actually the first time I've read a full length fic on this pairing and the questions in my head are so many loool but you're doing a great job and really making me love this pairing so can't wait for your next chater ^_6
As always, thanks for the great update, you made my day ^_^
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Squeels at possessive Itachi!!! Sooo hot!!!!
nice chapter!! the story is moving along nicely and Itachi is starting to get more interesting then his normal icy-self!
The bit with Sai flirting was funny!
looking forward to your next up-date!
ja!
nice chapter!! the story is moving along nicely and Itachi is starting to get more interesting then his normal icy-self!
The bit with Sai flirting was funny!
looking forward to your next up-date!
ja!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
melts into a puddle - that - now that was just plain hot and so completely satisfying - and i hate the fact that you won't be updating as much - but i understand - life is complicated. did i mention that it was so completely hot :winks:
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah hell yeah! they can't resist the smexyness of eachother...! lol sasuke is gonna lose it if he ever finds out that naruto has a think for his phycopathic brother..hehe. its kinda creepy to picture sai flirting...when you really think about it because he acts all perverted ad sadistic sometimes but really he has no emotions..(shudder) in a was I'd say itachi is the same way but really he's not because even though he outwardly doesn't show any most of the time he thinks emotionaly i.e ( gets irritated, doesn't like things, lust ect.) keep up the good work!
Ja ne!
Ja ne!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit indeed lol.
I liked that scene vewy vewy much! So outta curiosity since i praised you for this chap on Tonfa already, i'll rant on something else.....it says Itachi had experienced sex before right...but he was or seemed unused to that sensation or act while he and Naruto were initiating playing tonsil hokey lol, pardon the expression. So does that mean he'd never french kissed anyone before, but did the rest of the physical deed? Now the stuff's really gonna get interesting from here on out, hehehe. Good job.
I liked that scene vewy vewy much! So outta curiosity since i praised you for this chap on Tonfa already, i'll rant on something else.....it says Itachi had experienced sex before right...but he was or seemed unused to that sensation or act while he and Naruto were initiating playing tonsil hokey lol, pardon the expression. So does that mean he'd never french kissed anyone before, but did the rest of the physical deed? Now the stuff's really gonna get interesting from here on out, hehehe. Good job.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG DEFINITELY NOT TOO SOON PERFECT TIMING THAT KISS WAS SOOOOO HOT *drools on keyboard* OK OK THATS IT IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY *squeals* oh i can't wait till the next chapter to see how itachi reacts O_O wat will he do to naru-chan. Hopefully more kissing lol that was soo damn cute i can imagine it *sighs*
btw even if it takes u a month to update i will wait that how much i like this story right now and ur doing a great job trying to keep everyone in character.
*hugs* till next time ill be waiting for an update soon
btw even if it takes u a month to update i will wait that how much i like this story right now and ur doing a great job trying to keep everyone in character.
*hugs* till next time ill be waiting for an update soon
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:GIGGLES: Nope, i don't think It was too soon... making the wait last too long would have meant to force thee situation too much... I mean, Naruto isn't exactly a think-before-do guy, and he had been wainting for it too long already ^______^
You know, it was funny.. the first thing I tahught when I read that part was "Oh shit"... duh... I'm an axelled Narutard xD
I REALY wanna know what Itachi is gonna say about this xD
You know, it was funny.. the first thing I tahught when I read that part was "Oh shit"... duh... I'm an axelled Narutard xD
I REALY wanna know what Itachi is gonna say about this xD
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
This is a well developed story with slash and a actual plot. I have enjoyed your portrayal od Itachi and Naruto. I also LOVE ItaNaru fics. I mean SasuNaru is also great and love that too, but... well, it is overdone and it's refreshing to read other pairings. Plus they are sooo cute together.Anyway I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Aki WildQueen
PS. Mr. Bunny also adored this fic and begs you to update soon.
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This is a well developed story with slash and a actual plot. I have enjoyed your portrayal od Itachi and Naruto. I also LOVE ItaNaru fics. I mean SasuNaru is also great and love that too, but... well, it is overdone and it's refreshing to read other pairings. Plus they are sooo cute together.Anyway I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Aki WildQueen
PS. Mr. Bunny also adored this fic and begs you to update soon.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not too soon, not too soon at all. That was incredibly hot and you played it out perfectly. *ish a happy little fangirl* But now I am absolutely dancing in my seat and waiting for the next installment to find out Itachi's reaction to the whole thing. *offers to let you use my muse* Please update as soon as possible!!