rate_review Reviews

Oh wow!!! that came out of nowhere. It was kinda shocking but so hot at the same time. Definitely nosebleed worthy. I liked Itachi's reaction. How he was analyzing the situation even thought what they were doing was something intimate. It's just so Itachi *in my books anyway*. Now the fun begins.

I'm glad I'm not the only one getting impatient. Don't get me wrong I love the pace your going I don't want this to end anytime soon. It's just so hard not to want to the good part,if you know what i mean *wink wink* Okay now i really can't wait for the next chapter.

thank you (x3) for the last part.

p.s. I noticed Hina88 is one of your readers. Check her story "Volatile". Its really amazing.

oh, man~!
just when everything's getting so got.. a cliffy!!!
waaaaahhhh!!!
please, please do continue!
i so love your story!
i love naruto paired w/ sasuke but i also love this pairing~
write soon!
^_^

YES! thank you for updating! *glomps author* i loved it! i was wondering when they'd at least kiss! and what naruto said made me think were where they headding? well its late and i just wanna sleep. i'll review more next update ok? well night!

O_O Oh. Lord.

I vaguely remember you asking something about it being too soon? Are you CRAZY?
WHOA that was liek you slapped me in the face, one minute Itachi was checking Naruto's seal and the next whoa O_O were you trying to give me a heart attack? I mean really - was that what you were trying to do?

either way that was just AWESOME!!! and no it was not too soon I don't think. I mean, you didn't exagerate on the intimate contact between them which would've been too much for them at this stage I think, but you made it good and believable at this stage. I loved the hint of reactions you gave us there too, I can't wait for the next chapter where we will really see what they think and what their position on the kiss is. I'm also curious as to who will now initiate the next kiss which may not come for a while now I know, but I'm curious about it :D and obviously can't wait for it :D

Anyway, that was a great update to wake up to :d and as always the chapter was well written - and it still would've been even without the very very hot kiss :d I am starting to get worried about the seal though, is it going to backfire on Naruto? Hmm, hope not.

Hina xXxx

p.s. I think that was my longest review yet lol

Not too soon, it was just right, keep on writing!

Awwwwwwww cute! Naru-chan made the first move! ((so rare!!! but good!!!))
loved the way you described it for Itachi, he almost sounded like a kiss virgin!!! ((=^-^=))
totally agree on the Sai/Gaara front, brillaint characters, but not as a pairing! ((Gaara would desert coffin Sai in a week, tops!))
can't wait to see more interaction!!!!
@.@" what is it with computers at the moment???
looking forward to the next up-date!
luck!!!

I have high hopes for this story. I really like it^^
So, when will the smex start? *grin* The last scene was definitly not enough^^

yay! my computer is working again!!! and that means that i can review!!!!!!! =^-^=
Sasuke, Gaara, Sai interaction is always good! we really need to see some more of that!!!
what is up with that seal Itachi put on Naruto?
oh! that red head guy sould've made Naruto dress up in a skirt ((soooo cute!!!))
again two brillaint chapters!
keep it up!
luck!!!!

And yet another absolutely fantastic installment! *ish your biggest fan* This is absolutely wonderful and thank you so much! And if you do end up going with your other idea for a story i will gladly read it! Please update soon!!!

another good chap, keep it up!